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Apr 26 2006
| Fool no1 4 days ago |
If Tomorrow Never Comes 1364 critiques, 157 poems.
A love song that speaks volumes. The warmth and depth of feeling tinged with longing comes together to make this an excellent piece. Good luck in the contest...mal
| kvwriter 3 days ago |
Just Believe and it will happen! 4513 critiques, 108 poems.
Verdict: all encompassing
Such an aching, longing, yet beautiful love song! And, I love the line, "Treading the moments of life," as it really helped set the mood and tone of emotional despair brought about by being in love with such profound depth, yet unable to couple on any level, except via that "inner voice." Love is such a powerful state of being, all encompassing, and this treasure can yield the highest of elation and, sadly, the lowest of all agony and despair. You captured that essence only found in loving hearts, beating eternally for each other. Well done! I wish you the best in the contest! Now, put some music to these lyrics and let this poignant write truly breathe and live. Love, light and peace to you, always!--Kel
| Chuck Johnson right now |
Just fade away. 574 critiques, 152 poems. Currently online.
I am Truly Honored to have won this contest sponsored and judged by a poet of such quality. Thank you. I promise to continue to try to write at a level to be proud of. Thank you so much for your judgement.