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Guess what.. You found my site! Here you will find a varity of things, but for now there is the first few chapters of my story that started as dream. I hope you enjoy reading it because I enjoyed dreaming it...
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Well
lets see... I've been procrastinating. Luckily I have certain things to
push me forward. Ash edited trial one :3 thankies, Tiana is in the
process of editing Trial 2, and I've edited Trial 3 :3. Things are
moving pretty well despite the fact that college is murder XD. Soon Ill
have Trial 7 and 8 done, along with the remaining ones edited. ^_^ Wish
me luck :D.
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Ok
so.. ASH has edited the first Trial and I have put it up. Hopefully it
makes more sense than it did before XD. ::sigh:: I feel so silly for
not having these things edited before hand. Ah well... Ill be sure to
make sure its all edited properly before hand from now on.
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Hey
long time no update o.o! So, a friend of mine who goes by the name Ash
will be editing the chapters ^_^d So just wait a little while longer
and the new versions will be coming up!
Thank you All for your patience ^_^
oh and happy new year ^.^
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I Just realized by re-reading alot of this that there are some retarted typos... Ill have to fix that. For now Ill be working on fitting in the next chapter in my crazed schedule. After this semester is over Ill have lot more time on my hands, so Ill be able to type away ^_^. First on the list is to fix all the typos. Wish me luck~
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I just read somemore and I can't belive how poorly its written. I guess cause its all already inside my head it only makes sense to me when i first write it. Im sorry to everyone who had to deal with bad grammer and missing plot lines. Ill try to re-write them and fill in some blanks. -__- uwehhh after all this hype I spread about my story... its so poorly written.
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I finally finished Chapter 6. ^_^ ill start working on Chapter 7 and 8 as soon as possible.
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| >__< its been such a long time.. I apologize to everyone who keeps up on this site. I have been slacking. Im still adjusting to college life and i think i have time now to keep writing. ^___^ i promise that with in the next week the new chapter will be up. |
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x__X Sorry for taking so long with chapter 6. What with life problems and school work I havent had the time nor the will power. I'm somewhat half way done.
On a side not a friend convinced me to let him appear once in the story. So this will be the only chapter that wasnt actually in the dream. Thats partially why I havent had the will power to write it. However it should be interesting none the less. |
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I just finished Trial 5... As of right now it has not been edited but its being looked at by a good friend. For those who like action there isnt much in it... it's just character descriptions. |
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I finally edited all of the chapters. Also I took advice from Xeraelus and put two chapters on one page to save space... Apparently Freewebs doesnt alow too many pages :/. Anyway they are edited to my liking and should flow perfectly now. If there are still some errors I apologize, im only human.
Im going to start writing chapter 5 now and I WILL edit it before i post it... Thank you :D |
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I updated the forums. In the pictures section I added all the symbols that our main characters form on the faces. There is a purpose for those, but they wont be revealed until the story continues. Im almost done looking through the chapters for errors. I enlisted the help of a friend to help with the editing. Hes a greater writer than I so he can be trusted. |
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I just finished going through all of the chapters.. there are ALOT of typos. Ill be spending the next couple of days making sure I get all of the typos fixed and the story to run smoothly. If you already read them you dont have to read them again because the story is still the same. So dont expect chapter 5 until next week. It would be done sooner but im at home visiting for labor day so Ill be preocupied with my dear... loving.. family ... ... |
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Update 9/02/05 ::late at night::
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I finally finished Trial 4. After this is where the actual adventure starts.. No more explaining... just a new world. It took some time becuase the names were hard to come up with... ::thanks to xeraelus :P for help:: Anyway I hope you enjoy :D
::edit:: I just created an unfinished forums for those who wish to discuss the story...
http://s13.invisionfree.com/JibbunKai/index.php
Please Join if you have the time...
Thank you
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I have just finished adding the first throught third Trials... Im writing the fourth one. It should be done soon. I hope you enjoyed the first 3 so far! |
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