First of the series. Introduces about half of the characters and unveils part of the conflict. Click the picture to the right to read.
WTF was THAT?
- Numerous photos with grids. Bleh.
- Gabe is supposed to be a few months older than Sharlene. On the first page, it says "...just tall enough for her nine year old figure to see over and discover its emptiness." Then, later, it says "He didn't look too old, probably about eight years old like her." Not much of a screw-up, but eh. Just keep in mind Gabe is older.
- In the beginning of the scene where Ryan and Gabe are in front of Gabe's dorm door, it says "Two hours later" when it's obviously super late. Let's pretend it really said "Five hours later." =D
- Also in that scene, There are some pictures where it's still daylight. It turned into morning at the wrong time -__-