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1. To See The Scotsman. 

2. Disobedience.

3. To The Rescue.

4. The Sinful Bite

5.Smiggy And Me.

6. The Accident.

7. Just Ain't Cricket

8. Treacle Toffee

9. The Tricycle

10. Grand Night Out

11. The Last Time

12. Mending A Memory

To See The Scotsman .

The pushchair

Had no springs;

Every bump jarred

My baby bones.

 

The wheels clattered

Over the gravel path.

The sound of breath

Whistling through teeth.

Dotted with words and whoops of delight

Made me giggle.

 

We headed pell-mell

For the bridge;

The flying Scotsman was coming,

The brothers must see it.

 

I was clinging for my life

When suddenly, clunk..

The front wheels came off!

I went flying through the air

Propelled forward, landing on my face.

 

My little lungs

Expelled the air explosively.

On it’s way up it

Played a tune on my vocal chords

Pushing out a scream of agony.

 

Blood spurted,

Tears and snot

mingled

To paint my face a horror.

 

Gravel in my mouth;

Newly grown teeth

Hung on bloody pieces of gum.

 

Grandma, gardening

At that precise moment.

Came running.

 

Poor Podge and Degs

Got a clip around their ear holes

And the Scotsman flew by unnoticed.

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2004

Disobedience

The water would call

As if it were Lorelei luring me,

Yet Lorelei dwells far away

Not in the grand union canal!

 

I would stand and sway

Dance with the reeds,

Fly with the dragon fly

And lie to watch the roach

Chin cupped in grubby hands.

 

I became as the chameleon,

Dark chestnut head among

A stand of bull rushes

Watching the moorhen;

 

Intoxicated by the salty tang

Of the reeds,

Hypnotized by water boatmen

Skimming the surface;

 

Until the low throb throbbing beat

Of an approaching narrow boat

Would snap me back

Bringing me to my bare feet,

 

Running to meet them

Waving and calling

“Whatcha carryin’ mister?”

 

Then before I got an answer

I was caught.

 

There on the other side

Over the wall

My mothers angry face;

 

A finger pointing was enough

To send me scuttling home

With an already tingling hide,

 

Knowing there would be

An early night

And no tea for me.

 

Yet I knew next time

I wouldn’t be so impetuous.

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2004

To The Rescue.

Da-dad-da-daaaa-
The US Cavalry had arrived
Just in time to rescue
The homesteaders from a fate worse than death.

Roy Rogers fired into the air
In exultation
As reinforcements crested the hills
To swoop down and free his sweetheart
From the evil clutches of the Sioux.

The Redskins were circling,
Wreaking dastardly torments
On the wretched creature bound to the totem,
Whoopin’ and a hollerin’ a war dance-

“Come on you lot, mam sez we’re ‘avin’
Our picture took“
Gill's shrill voice penetrated,
freeze framed the action-

Tumbleweed and cacti fractured and faded,
The totem morphed into a silver birch
Part of the copse at the top of the field,
On that English Summer Sunday afternoon.

The grainy black and white
Rag-tag family group, re-emerged
My reminiscing eyes re-focused.

I smiled fondly as
The beginings of rebellion resonated,
Then gradually crackled
Into a million Whispers
That echoed across
The long lost decades.

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The Sinful Bite

Mr Griffin the baker

Wrapped the still warm loaf

In a brown paper bag

The tantalizing yeasty aroma

Of freshly baked bread

Tickled and tweaked my five year old nose

I walked away from his battered old blue van

With an overwhelming temptation

To bite the corner from the crusty delicacy

All fear of a stinging behind forgotten

As the delightful smell crept further and further

Up my nostrils to tease the pleasure zones of my brain.

Once bitten, chewed, savoured and swallowed

Realization of the sin committed

Became immense and unforgivable-

I crept through the back door

Slid the mutilated evidence of my crime

Onto the kitchen table

And legged it up the stairs and into my bed

Anticipating punishment,

Yet hoping to avoid the red bottom-

I fell asleep to the distant drone

Of ‘Dick Barton Special Agent’ on the wireless

Waking only briefly as gentle hands

Took off my dungarees and tucked me in for the night.

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Smiggy And Me

 

Smiggy the black and white Jack Russell
barked excitedly, his tiny paws lifting off the ground
each time his jaws snapped together.

The blackberries lay bruised and bleeding juice
over the pavement.
My Robertson’s jam jar was smashed to smithereens
yet the label remained intact
and the golliwog’s grin undiminished mocked me
from its' resting place among the shards.

By this time Smiggy had stopped yapping,
his pink tongue lolled between black lips,
he looked pleased with the chaos he had caused.
I stared at the bloody gaping wound
on my knee and screamed out my agony.

Knee bathed and elastoplasted
I was taken to see Dr Redmond.
He of the Johnny Walker whisky breath
and seven-o-clock shadow chin.

Each bump and jolt of the Midland Red Bus
jarred my knee and squeezed out yet another
sob from my miserable little mouth
as I felt the cat gut pull

and the antiseptic sting my flesh.

A tenderly meant wipe of a scatchy hankie,
moistened with mummy spit
mopped up self pitying teardrops
from smudged and grubby cheeks;
a rustle of paper,
and an orange flavoured Spangle was
popped into my mouth to
lift its’ corners, as well as my spirits.

Slowly light dawned, if I played my cards right
Grandma would share her Horlicks
With me tonight.

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The Accident

Degs was sitting on the branch

Podge had shinned half way up,

While I was at the bottom of the tree

With my dress held out

to catch the illegal plums

All fat and juicy.

My mouth was watering

In anticipation…

“Leave them plums alone our Mu

And keep yer eyes peeled”

Podge’s harsh whisper came

Hissing down the tree.

I looked guiltily around

Checking this way and that.

Then I saw him,

All corduroy and gaiters.

His shot gun broken, tucked under one arm,

The other arm punching the air

His mouth moving ominously.

The plums went flying,

I was off like a rocket

Toward the rally banks.

Thump oomph!

“Wooah watchit”

The sound of running feet behind me.

Gasps of breath sucked into

Bursting lungs…

A roar from the road,

A sickening crunch

A clatter,

Then silence…

I halted,

Podge and Degs halted,

The corduroy and gaiters halted,

We all turned to gawp.

Flushed with horror

And excitement

We headed for the road.

Plums forgotten,

Eyes full of broken bodies and blood.

A mangled motor bike

And a drunken telegraph pole.

A single curl of smoke

Drifting from the bike

Told me time was still moving.

Suddenly, I was snatched up

In strong arms and whisked indoors.

Podge and Degs dragged by their shirt collars

Followed in sharp time, protesting loudly.

I looked back

Just in time to see

Two broken bodies disappear beneath a tarpaulin

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Just Ain't Cricket

With home made bat

and tennis ball,

wickets chalked upon the wall

Freddie Truman

takes his aim

blasting the novice batsman’s game.

“OWZAT!!”

screams Freddie

“c’mon yer out”

“No I ain’t,” I say, with a pout

“it never ‘it the bloomin’ wicket.

c’mon Podge this ain’t cricket!”

 

Podge stares me out

with steely smile.

“LBW by a mile!”

I throw the bat onto the floor

“ I ain’t playin’ with you no more

LBW! Just ain’t fair

play with Degs you mangy cur!”

I’m just a girl

but I ain’t no fool!

You just made up

that stupid rule!”

 

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Treacle Toffee

Mum Loved the wintertime.

When we were kids

she could always fool us with the clock

and get us into bed early.

While in summertime she re-hung

the black out curtains.

During school holidays

she would happily let us make treacle toffee;

eating it tied our tongues for hours.

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The Tricycle

The tricycle tantalised me

it stood between us

like a tyrant’s taunt.

We were buddies you and I

I lusted after the tricycle

but it belonged to you.

I knew that you cared for me

but you loved your tricycle more

than you prized me.

You gazed into my eyes

and saw my desire,

you laughed and peddled

away down the path

and out into the street

 

“Daisy, Daisy give me you answer do”

 

That was the last time

we played together that Summer.

 

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A Grand Night Out

It was to be a grand night out
with music and dancing.
He had refused to dance,
said he would rather watch
so they sat together in silence.
She heard the merriment of their friends,
envied them.
He excused himself, went off to the men’s room.
She used to say he had the fastest zip in the West
because he always came back
before she was aware he had gone.

That night was different;
he was gone for an age.
The dancers
whirled and twirled,
twirled and whirled.
while she sat alone waiting
and the knot of fear in her belly grew
with each passing second.
She took herself off
and found him
in the arms of her best friend,
laughing down into her eyes
his mouth just above hers
their breaths mingling
their hips touching
swaying in time to the music.
She felt invisible,
as though she had ceased to exist;
of course in a way she had…

The Last Time

Gaunt, was always

The word that fitted you best,

 

Even from the first time I saw you

It suited you,

Added a mysterious air

To your devil may care

Demeanour.

 

Tall and slim

To the point of scrag end, I used to joke,

 

That was when

We were still in love,

Could still laugh at each other’s silliness.

 

Gaunt, was still

How I saw you that last time,

 

By then, you were

Staring from liver diseased eyes

Grinning with cigarette stained teeth

Smelling of decay and cheap whiskey.

 

There was no longer any mystery ,

Yet, the devil remained…

Uncaring.

 

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Mending A Memory

I found it folded neatly in a box

of stuff from way back, when life was easy.

I took it out and shook the dust away

and the memories poured forth, made me sway

 

with the force of their potency, snapping

me back in time to the day I wore it

my wedding. It wasn’t a traditional

wedding gown just a black and white sheath dress,

 

yet elegant in its simplicity.

As the dust motes danced in the morning light

the stale fragrance of Evening In Paris

assailed my senses and re-ignited

 

awareness too long dulled by monotony.

As long dead faces and voices echoed

across the lost years my eye caught the tear

in the pleat at the back of the precious frock.

 

I set about mending it instantly

as I did so memories good and bad

merged and became a whole experience.

Peace came as I mended a memory…

 

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