February 3, 2008 Yeah, so I've been really bad with making updates... Anyway, my new year's resolution was to finish this novel this year, so I'm going to set little goals to get there! Haha, so I've added a prologue... I've had a hell of a time trying to get a prologue that wasn't too cliche to kick off my story. Still don't think I have it. XD Anyway, so I added a two page prologue and kicked off chapter one. Don't worry The Mercenary chapter'll be back after I get rid of many unnecessary commas and fix the time of year and little conotations in descriptions and whatnot. So it'll be back probably by the end of next week. Progress on Chapter Two: The Thief is technically complete, but is going under revision and editing, so it should be up by the end of the month. :) Tell me what you think about the Prologue! And bug Sand to update! | August 26, 2007 So I had a sudden rush of inspiration about...... A month ago. XD And I typed up the first six pages nearly immediately afterwards! So why haven't I updated? Well... It's a little thing called school... XD Lol, I love it, but I'm just way to busy this year.... I typed half a page this last week... Anyway, so I'm reorganizing The Link.... I'm adding about 5 or 6 chapters of exposition, and then after that will be the current chapter two and three, renumberd to be 7 or 8 or something.... And if the ending of Chapter 1 is a little iffy and not well thought out, it's because I haven't re-read what I've written there yet... XD Anyway, enjoy! Feedback welcome and wanted! | July 31, 2007 Alright... So I did some restructuring... Went back to the past chapters and fixed how I worded some parts.... Changed the pace of the story and got some of the incorrect connotations at the same time. :D I mashed together the former Chapter 3 with 2, and also added the completed chapter 3.... Chapter 1 and 2 now have titles, but I lack one for Chapter 3 right now.... Up for suggestions! :) Anyway, happy reading... And please, ANY constructive feedback, be it negative or positive, is helpful and much appreciated! | May 29, 2007 Whatever... I updated Chapter Three... But I think that it's crap.... Whatever..... -_- | MAY 15, 2007 As you all may know, I have some competition now. Way to go, Zale, you're making me work extra hard to aspire to your level. XD Anyway, I'm planning on redoing the layout so no one's masculinity is challenged and it's not so darn bright. x_x And we with bad eyes don't have to get headaches trying to read super awesome updates from that Link guy. And the shoutbox isn't working out; it's not letting us post that much. Then again, that may be our fault for trying to use it as a chatroom. P: And this method of news sucks. XD I can try to get something up here so we can make better posts and things. If I'm not lazy. So, expect something to be done around next Easter. >.> |