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Al's, Princess Elessariels, and my story!

 
Chapter 1: *Sweet Crushes* by Alatariel and Elessariel
 
               Rebecca slept peacefully in her canopy bed as she dreamt of her knight 
in shining armor, Will. Although he was devoted to her sister, 
Elizabeth, she still had a secret passion for him. Only her sister Alison Swann 
and dear friend Estashia Lorington knew of her sweet crush. 
        “Should we wake her yet,” a quiet voice asked.
        “No not yet,” the other voice whispered.
        “Oh please? If we let her sleep she is going to sleep our whole day 
away,” the first voice complained.
        “Just a little while longer, be patient,” the second voice sounded 
annoyed. 
        “Fine,” the first voice said with a childish voice.
        Rebecca rolled over trying not to notice the voices. She hated it when 
people woke her up in the middle of a good dream.
        “Now,” the first voice asked impatiently.
        “Alright,” the second voice gave in, “Follow my lead.” “One……… two………. 
Three!”
        “WAKE UP Rebecca!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” both of the voices yelled. 
        Rebecca jumped up in her bed, “What!?” 
        “Time to wake up sleepy head!!!” Alison  chimed. Alison had long brown 
hair with brown eyes; she was always in a good mood. Although she had a 
crush on the Commodore 
        “Yep! Hurry so we can catch a quick peek at Lliw,” Estashia giggled; 
Lliw was their code name for Will. Estashia had dark brown hair that was 
up in two braids. She always had a sort of flame for adventure in her 
deep brown eyes. Estashia had her own little secret crush, too, that 
only her friends knew. Captain Jack Sparrow was her secret crush, a pirate 
who visited Will often. She admired him from afar, but he had no flying 
clue who she was.
        “I will only hurry if we get to see Lliw!!” Rebecca sighed as she fell 
back on her pillows. 
        “Fine, but hurry! We will meet you downstairs,”  Alison said as she 
walked out the door with Estashia following  behind.
 
 
 
 
 
Chapter 2: *Shyness* (ELESSARIEL! Very corny name for chapter. If you 
don’t like it PLEASE change it! Lol)
 
Rebecca quickly came downstairs and found Alison and Estashia waiting 
impatiently.
        “What took you so long?” Asked Alison.
           “I’m so sorry I left you all waiting! But let us hurry up! 
Come on!” Rebecca told them.
They ran out the door in so much of a hurry that Alison banged right 
into the Commodore!
           “Oh, my!” She said blushing, “I’m so sorry!”
           “It’s alright! Are you hurt? He asked.
           “No I’m fine. Thank you for asking though.” She said.
           “I should be on my way now. Good day.” He said and walked 
on.
Rebecca and Estashia couldn’t help from laughing so hard. 
           “Oh stop it!” Alison yelled at them.
           “But we can’t help! You should have seen yourself!” Estashia 
said laughing.
           “You turned all red and when you talked it sounded like you 
didn’t even know what to say! He probably thinks your some strange 
person!” Rebecca said laughing.
Alison ignored them and walked on. Soon they were walking into town 
when Will came waking by.
           “There he is!” Yelled Rebecca jumping up and down.
           “And you think I’m strange!” Alison said.
           “Well I think you should go over there and talk to him, 
Thea.” Estashia told her.
           “I could never do that!” Rebecca said.
           “I bet you could!” said Alison and she pushed Rebecca right in 
front of Will.
           “I’m so sorry! I should have seen where I was going!” Will 
said to her. He looked. She looked like she was in a trance. “Are you 
okay?” He asked.
           “Oh, yes! I’m fine! Never better!” Rebecca said. 
           “Yes. Well, good day m’lady.” Will said and walked off.
Rebecca came back to where Alison and Estashia were. They were laughing so 
hard that they fell onto the ground.
           “It wasn’t that funny!” Rebecca said, “I mean he even talked to 
me! We had a conversation!”
            “Yeah, sure! Whatever you call this” and Alison started to 
do an imprestion of Thea in a trance. Estashia laughed even harder. 
Then she stopped. She looked down the street to where the harbor was. 
There was a ship. Alison and Rebecca saw it too. They all stared at it. 
            “He has come back!” Said Estashia.
 

~~~~~Take it away Elessariel!

~~~~~ MWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA It’s MY turn!!! Hahahahahahahhaha 

      Chapter 3: Nightmare

            Estashia leapt w/joy, “He’s back!! He’s back!!!”

      “Oh no,” Rebecca sighed.

      “Oh great,” Alison said w/a heavy sigh, “she gonna want to……” Alison had no chance to finish her sentence before being pulled away w/Rebecca. “Do we have to go w/you?” Alison pleads.

      “Of course you do. I went w/you guys to see the men you like now you must come w/me!” There was a flame of excitement in Estashia’s eyes as the harbor drew closer.

      The smell of salt water and fish grew strong as they reached the harbor. As they approached the big ship Rebecca caught site of Will standing next to a pirate w/a red bandanna across his forehead.

      “Oh no way am I going any further,” Rebecca pulled free from Estashia’s grasp.

      “Why,” Estashia asked confused by Rebecca’s sudden urge to get away. She looked around and saw Will, “Oh, I see. Fine then I will just tell Will about your secret,” she teased.

      “Don’t even think about it Estash,” Rebecca growled, “Im coming,” she mumbled as she hid herself behind Alison.

      “I don’t see what the big deal is,” Alison giggled, “He’s your sister’s boyfriend, and you guys are like best friends. There is nothing to be afraid about Rebecca,” Alison insisted stepping out of the way so Rebecca was clearly seen.

      Rebecca only mumbled and looked down at the ground trying not to be noticed.

      “Hello Jack,” Estashia greeted him cheerfully as she walked up next to him.

      “Hello my lady,” he kindly said bowing down.

      “How was your trip,” she asked anxious to know what he did.

      As Jack started to tell Estashia about his trip Will noticed Rebecca looking down, “Thea are you alright,” Will asked concerned.

      “Im fine,” Rebecca nervously shot out.

Will walked up next to her and lifted her chin w/his finger, “Are you sure your ok? You seem,” he paused, “quiet. Your not as cheery as you usually are.”

“I assure you I’m fine,” Rebecca giggled.

“Alright then,” Will laughed.

“Well we should get going Estash,” Alison said as she pried Estashia off of Jack.

“Bye Jack,” Estashia waved as she walked away.

“She likes you did you know that,” Will teased Jack as soon as the girls were out of sight.

“She’s a cute girl,” Jack smiled at the thought of Estashia’s smiling face, “Who knows there might be something there for us in the future. But what about you and Rebecca? Is there hope there?”

“There is always hope there. I would tell her how I feel but I’m stuck w/Elizabeth. If only she knew. If I ever brake up w/Elizabeth then I will let her know,” Will and Jack smiled at each other as they stepped on the ship.

“Well do you guys wanna have a sleepover,” Estashia asked eagerly.

“That would be fun,” Alison smiled.

“I want to sleep in my own bed tonight thank you,” Rebecca said w/a yawn.

“Fine party-pooper. Tell dad I’m at Estash’s house,” Alison chimed as she walked off w/Estashia.

“Dad is on a trip remember?”

“Oh yeah! Well see ya tomorrow Rebecca,” Alison laughed.

“Bye,” Rebecca smiled.

When Rebecca got home she went straight to bed. As she lay on the feather pillow she thought about what happened today. But she didn’t get off far in the day’s big events because she dozed off.

“Rebecca!! Rebecca wake up!!” Elizabeth screamed.

Rebecca opened her eyes and looked up at Elizabeth. “What’s wrong,” she asked confused.

“The house is on fire we need to get out,” Elizabeth screamed.

To Rebecca’s horror she saw her whole room in a bright blaze. “What happened,” she yelled as she got up out of bed.

“Some pirates have set in on fire, we must get out,” she yelled so Rebecca could hear her over the crackling fire. Elizabeth ran over to a window and opened it quickly. “Go,” she yelled, “You must get out!”

Rebecca ran out onto the balcony getting ready to jump down. She crawled over the banister and was ready to jump when a strong arm wrapped around her waist and pulled her back. Rebecca screamed in horror as the pirate swung back holding the rope tightly in his hand. “Elizabeth,” Rebecca screamed extending her hand out to try and grab her sister’s hand. But Elizabeth was engulfed in the flames and Rebecca’s heart sunk as her view turned black.

 

 

~~~~~~~~ TAY!!!!! AL yoouurr turn!!

            Chapter 4 Captive

Rebecca was taken aboard the pirates’ ship. She sat her down next to
two other people sitting on the ground. They were shaking in fear.
Rebecca blinked. And sadly she was not dreaming. It was Alison and Estashia!
They had been captured too. They must have thought that Estashia was
also the Governor’s daughter. After awhile they fell asleep but Rebecca
kept her eyes open. She didn’t tell them that Elizabeth was dead. She
did not want to make them more depressed then she was. It was just not
the right time to tell them.
         They all woke up the next day. The pirates were all stareing
at them. Rebecca was afraid but when she saw that Estashia and Alison
were still there with her she began to feel a little better. They all
kept silent and didn’t say a word to each other the rest of the day. Then
later in the afternoon Rebecca looked from behind the ship.
          “Look I see a ship!” cried Rebecca.
“Quiet!” Said Estashia, “You don’t want them to know it! I can see a
British flag! We are going to be rescued!”
          “Oh I can’t wait! What about you Alison?” Rebecca asked but
there was no answer. She looked next to her. Alison was lying on the
floor, it looked like she could be dying!
“Alison!” They both yelled. Rebecca touched her, “She’s going cold!”
          “What are we going to do? She must have caught it from this
ugly cold thing they call a ship!” Estashia said. Then both the girls
were startled to hear the pirates yell to speed up. They must have seen
the ship! They were so afraid. The ship kept speeding but the H.M.S.
Dauntless was to fast. The girls looked and could see the men ready to
fight. “They sent the whole British Navy!” Rebecca whispered. Then she
looked at the other side of the ship. Captain Jack Sparrow was on the
Black Pearl! Him and his crew along with Will started to fight. “Quickly!”
They heard a voice. It was the Commodore. He helped them onto his ship
while Jack and his crew distracted the bad pirates. The Commodore
noticed Alison lying on the floor ill. “Oh no!” He said quietly. He picked
her up and then jumped back onto the ship. And they sailed back to Port
Royal.

Chapter 5 A Sad And Both Wonderful Day!

They sailed back to Port Royal only to go to their dear sister’s
funeral. Alison regained her strength but was still a little weak. After the
funeral she walked outside. She saw Jack comporting Estashia. She was
so happy that Estashia was finally being noticed and cared for by the
man she loved so much! She looked at Rebecca. She was watching Will but
was to shy to go near him. Alison stood where she remembered her sister
had been standing when she fell after the Commodore purposed to her.
Alison giggled. Then she felt someone stand next to her. She looked. It
was Commodore Norrington. She almost died thinking he decided to be next
to her! “I’m very sorry about your sister. It must be hard for you.” He
said to her gently. “Yes it is very hard for me to except her passing.”
She said trying to not act shy. Then she turned to him and said, “I
know you loved her. It must be hard for you too.” He looked down, “It is.”
Alison wanted to cry, “I feel like it was my fault. I should have been
there. I could have saved her!” “Never blame yourself! It was meant to
be. Maybe if you were there you would have died too!” He said trying to
calm her down. She put her head up. He stared into her eyes. Alison
felt like running away. She was too shy to even say one more word! “I know
this may seem a little odd, but I must speak my mind.” He said still
staring in her eyes, “You have grown into a beautiful young lady. And I
have wanted to ask this question for a very long time.” He got down on
one knee. So many thoughts were racing through Alison’s head.  “Will you
be my wife?” he asked. “Oh my! I have wanted you to ask this same
question!” Then she stopped she was starting to sound like a little kid
again. “Yes I will be your wife.” She said smiling. He smiled and kissed
her. Estashia did not even notice a thing. She was still talking to Jack.
But Rebecca had been watching the whole thing. “Congratulations!” cried
Rebecca running to her. Then Alison had an idea. “Why don’t you go tell
Will what happened?” she told her. “I could never do that!” Rebecca
said . “Yes you can! Now go!” Alison told her. Rebecca went off to find
Will. Alison smiled and then looked at the Commodore. It was still a
dream for her! The governor came over. “What is going on? You all seem to
be smiling so something must have happened!” he said. “Oh, daddy! I’m
going to marry the Commodore!” She said. “That’s wonderful!” He said
giving her a hug. Then Alison ran over to Estashia. And then she ran and
told everyone else that she knew. It was about an hour when Alison
realized she left Commodore! She ran back but he was not there. It was
evening now so she figured he was at Fort Charles. When she went there he
looked like he didn’t have good news. “I’m so sorry Miss Swann, but, I
talked to your father and we have both decided that you are still very
young. And that if we are to be married it should be in 3 years at least.
I’m sorry. Will still be able to see each other though!” He said trying
to smile. Alison wanted to cry. How could this of happened. “You’re
right.” she said, “Good evening Commodore.” And she walked home. When she
got back home Rebecca and Estashia were talking about Jack and Will.
Alison came and sat on the bed and sighed. “What’s wrong?” Estashia
asked.

Chapter 6: Running

“Commodore and father say I’m too young to be married,” she sighed looking down at the floor.

“Your not too young,” Rebecca stated, “I think you are at the perfect age to marry Commodore.” Estashia nodded in agreement.

“Well father certainly doesn’t agree,” her voice started to sound  angry, “I don’t wanna just sit here and do nothing about it,” she yelled hitting her hand on the nightstand.

“Calm down Alison,” Rebecca whispered putting her hand on her sister’s shoulder, “It’s nothing to get upset about. You will eventually marry Commodore.”

“Yes I know but I want to marry him now,” Alison got up off the bed and looked out the window at the moon, “If I can’t have him now then I’m going to run away,” she whispered.

“What,” Estashia asked both her and Rebecca getting up off the bed and walking up next to her.

“If I can’t have Commodore now then I’m going to run away,” she repeated still looking at the moon.

“But why? Why go away from your family for something you will eventually have,” Estashia asked.

“I don’t have hardly any family left! Elizabeth is gone, father was the one to say I was too young and Rebecca is the only family I have left,” she cried looking Estashia in the eye.

“Running away won’t solve anything Alison,” Rebecca said sternly.

“Yes it will I’m going to leave for three years and return so I can marry Commodore.”

“Why do you want to run away when you could just see him everyday until the three years are up,” Rebecca asked.

“It will be harder that way. Seeing the man you love so much and not being able to be w/him for three years. It’s as if I’m teasing my own heart,” she looked back up at the moon, “I’m leaving tonight. If you want to come go ahead it will be more fun if it weren’t just me.”

“I’m going w/you,” Estashia said smiling, “I can’t let you go alone.”

“Thanks Estashia,” Alison smiled embracing her friend.

“I guess I will go too. I don’t want to be left alone,” Rebecca gave in.

“Thanks Rebecca,” Alison whispered putting her hand on Rebecca’s shoulder.

“It will be much more fun w/you,” Estashia smiled.

“Lets get going before someone comes to check on us,” Alison said tying the sheets to make rope. Alison threw the rope down off the balcony; it landed w/a soft thud on the cool night grass. One by one they climbed down the rope and onto the grass. Alison was the last to come down.

“Quickly lets get going before they see us,” she ordered, “Quietly or they will hear us.”

They quietly but quickly ran out the gate and out of town. They didn’t talk for awhile until they got safely out of town.

“I wonder if they will miss us,” Estashia said looking up at the moon as she walked.

“I wonder if they will come look for us,” Rebecca added looking down at the ground thinking of Will.

“I hope not. It will make it easier for us,” Alison said coldly.

“Can we stop for the night,” Estashia asked w/a yawn.

“We will stop and rest in those bushes,” Alison pointed to a bunch of bushes.

When they finally stopped they were exhausted. Estashia was the first to lie down and fall asleep.

“Girls wake up,” the governor called from outside the closed door. He opened it to wake them up but to his horror they weren’t there. “Maid,” he yelled. A maid came rushing up to him.

“Yes sir may I get anything for you,” she asked politely.

“Did the girls plan on going anywhere this morning,” he asked.

“No sir. The Lorington’s girl Estashia is gone too,” she stated.

“I want the whole town searched for all three of them immediately,” he ordered.

“Right away sir,” she rushed out of the room and down the stairs.

Soon after the whole town was searched for hours but there was no trace of them. Will decided to take the matter to the commodore.

“Commodore,” he said bowing, “Estashia, Rebecca, and Alison have gone missing we need to look for them.”

“I know. Im already having a search party look for them,” he said looking at maps of the whole area.

“That isn’t good enough,” he yelled, “I know why she left too.”

“If you have any information on any of them I would have you tell me Will.”

Will sighed, “She left because she couldn’t marry you now. She is mad at her father so she decided to leave; Rebecca and Estashia followed being good friends.”

The commodore looked down grieved by what he just heard, “Alright mister Turner, you, me, and your pirate friend Jack Sparrow will go look for them.”

“Thank you commodore,” Will smiled running out the door to find Jack.

~~~~~~~~Tee hee hee I like to write stories!! J tay Al! J

 

~~~~~~~~~Tayyyyy Al doesn’t wanna write just yet so I will keep on going!! :D

            Chapter 7: Caught

      It was morning before they even knew it, the bright sun beating at their faces through the branches of the bushes.

      “Lets go hurry,” Alison whispered waking up Rebecca and Estashia, “Hurry before they pick up our trail.”

      But it was no use a low voice came ringing in from out side, “Did you hear that,” he asked, “It sounded like a voice coming from the bushes.” Then from outside the bush an ugly face appeared in front of them, “Look what we have here,” he said and another ugly scrawny face appeared.

      “Well look at the treasure we have here, lets take them along w/us what do ya say,” he asked the other man.
      “I say we tie them up and take them w/us,” the ugly man grinned.

They gave up w/out a fight because the men were much bigger than they were, so they wrapped fat thick rope around their wrists. The rope was heavy and cut at their small wrists.

      They walked for some miles w/smelly ugly men until they came to a wooden house that seemed to have being decaying. Estashia bent her head down and whispered to what seemed like, “I wish Jack were here.”

The leader burst through the door and yelled, “Look at what we have brought you tonight boys!” A roar came from all the drunk men as they saw the three girls.

      “Stick together no matter what happens,” Alison whispered to them.

      The girls were pushed up against a wall were all the men stared at them uncomfortably. The men inched closer and closer to them and the girls tried desperately to get away. Just as the men were reaching out to touch them the door burst open.

      “Good Evening Gentlemen,” Jack smiled.

      “Jack,” Estashia screamed smiling at him.

      “Shut up,” a man yelled at her slapping her across the face.

      The other girls winced at the noise the slap made. Estashia just kept her head low and tried not to look up. Jack ran down and stood in front of the girls whom were now seeing if Estashia was alright.

      “Evening ladies,” he said to them. Will and the commodore rushed in and looked at the army of men.

      “This is going to be hard,” Will whispered to commodore.

      “Indeed it will be and why is Jack up in front of the girls,” he asked.

      “Probably up there protecting Estashia,” Will whispered, “He loves her did you know that?”

      “And what about you? Why did you come,” commodore asked.

      “Rebecca,” Will looked down at her. She was standing by Estashia whom had been knocked out.

      “Get out of the way! We found them first,” a man yelled trying to push Jack out of the way, but Jack wouldn’t budge.

      “You hurt the woman I love I wont move,” he said sternly. Alison’s and Rebecca’s head shot up at his last comment.

      If only she were awake she would love to have heard that,” Alison thought.

      Commodore and Jack went and stood next to Jack, “Lets hurry and get them out of here,” commodore whispered to them as they drew their swords. The other men drew out their swords ready to fight. They all stood tense waiting for someone to make the first move. Until one man tried to grab Estashia, but failed when Jack stabbed him. In a sudden rage the men began to run towards Will, Jack, and the commodore. It wasn’t until many men had died that they gave up.

      “Hurry while they are surrendering,” Will said. Jack picked up Estashia carefully and ran out the door w/the others following behind.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~ K MY TURN IS OVER!! HOPED YOU LIKE IT CUZ WHEN I WRITE STUFF IT AINT GETTING ANYBETTER!! J

Chapter 8 Going home
 
     They ran till they were now far away from where they had found the 
girls. Jack sat down and was holding Estashia. She still hadn’t woken 
up. 
Alison walked out to the shore and kicked the waves angrily as they 
came in. Commodore walked over to her. 
        “I know why you ran away.” He said softly. 
        “I see.” She said, “And everything has gone wrong!”                                  
        “You know I have to listen your father. Three years will go by 
fast. You will see.” He said trying to make her feel better. 
        “NO! Three years is too long! It will be torture!” She said 
still very angry. 
        “But you are still young!” He said rather strongly. Then she 
looked up at him, “But you said it yourself. I’m a ‘beautiful young 
lady’! That’s just what you said!” she said a little quieter but still with 
an angry tone. 
        “I didn’t know you were only 15!” He said now as loud as she 
was. Alison put her head down. She knew he was right. The youngest person 
she ever knew that got married was 17. “But—“ She couldn’t think of 
anything to say. Her eyes filled with tears and she burst out crying. She 
ran and hugged tightly to the Commodore. 
Will and Rebecca were actually having a better time. They were in a big 
conversation. 
Estashia woke up. Rebecca and Will ran to her. 
        “What happened?” she asked. 
They told her everything that had happened. 
        “But where is Alison?” Estashia asked. 
Jack looked at where Alison was. She was still holding onto the 
Commodore sobbing. 
        “She’s just over there. Um…err…I think she is just a little 
busy right now. Don’t worry she will come and see you soon. But you should 
rest now. You have had a horrible day.” Jack said to her smiling. 
Rebecca quickly came to her aid and took care of her while Jack and 
Will talked. 
                      To be continued.... 
~~~**~~HEH Hiya!! P. Eless B. here!! My twin Sister Elessriel wanted to join in on the writing!!
Soooo here is the chapter she wrote!! I THINK IT IS SOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!! The best writers in this story are 
Al and Eless Im just a mon...I mean Hobbit at the end!!! O'Well I love Elijah and Frodo and.....etc.!! Well here is her 
chapter!!!!!!!!!~~**~~~

Chapter 9--Tears and kisses ---i'm no good at titles sorry! u guyz can change it if u want!!

"So...how are you feeling?" enquired Rebecca, upon return to Port Royal, the trio were all cuddled around Estashia's bed.

"Fine" Estashia replied, beaming she sighed and closed her eyes for a second recalling the bliss she was in, when she lay in Jack's arm, she felt so loved, protected and warm.

Alison rose from the bed and walked towards the window and looked down at the cobblestones paved on the bustling streets and sighed a silent tear trickled down her cheek and she could taste the bitterness, she felt a hand on her shoulder and turned around and found herself face to face with Rebecca who hugged her and made her sit down.

"Look, Commodore Norrington loves YOU! Otherwise, he wouldn't have propsed to you!"

"But.....why do I have to wait??? Why can't I marry him? You don't know...you don't know how much I love him...how much I need him....I love him Rebecca! Really I love him..." and with that last sentence she buried herself into her lap and started to cry.

Suddenly there was a soft knock on the door, Estashia peered curiously, Alison was too busy crying to notice the Commodore slip into the room, with a look of sorrow, he glanced at Alison and breathed "oh dear.." he swiftly walked towards Alison and pried her apart and made her look at him straight in the eye, "Alison! Look at me, I love you, I do, but it's only a matter of 3 years, can you not wait that long?"

"NO!", yelled Alison and yanked herself away from the Commodore and turned her back she looked up at the ceiling and down at the floor determined to not look at the Commodore, she knew that she didnot have the strength to look into his weak blue eyes which she had come to be addicted to and in them she found herself intoxicated. She continued in her gradually weakening voice, "I cannot wait this long, you do not know how much I have pined for you...love has no age! I WANT TO MARRY YOU WHEN WILL YOU UNDERSTAND?? I WANT TO MARRY YOU NOW! NOT IN 3 YEARS NOT EVEN IN 1 YEAR...NOW NOW NOW!!"

The Commodore was at loss for words, he looked at Alison and for a breif second he looked like he would love nothing more than too grab Alison hold her in his arms and confess his feelings for her. He looked down and back at Alison again and softly said, "If I could marry you, I would. I have only loved you, this wait also tears me, but I can wait a lifetime for you as long as I could have you in the end, the thought that one day you will be mine, allows me to live, allows me to breathe. I have never loved another, nor I think shall I ever." and with that he walked out of the room leaving Alison behind looking bewildered.

The room was yet interrupted again, this time however the reek of rum drifted through the air and tickled Estashia's nose, she bolted up and cried out JACK! JACK! Rebecca laughed and said, "Well I guess Alison and I should leave you and Jack to talk!" and with that Rebecca and Alison left, perfect timing because just a minute after they had left Jack's face peered through the door and asked "Am I disturbing you?"

"NO!" gushed Estashia, "Please Jack, come in!" Jack grinned and Estashia's heart melted once more. Jack paraded in his hands behind his back and sat down on Estashias bed only centimeters away from Estashia.

"Here", he murmured and from behind his back he produced a bottle of rum which was half empty (or shoudl I say half full ;) ) and a bouqet of daisies. Estashia almost wept with happiness as she recieved the gifts, Jack looked at the bottle of rum and blushed, "Sorry love, I couldn't resist"

Estashia giggled, and Jack came in closer, Estashia stopped and then Jack said, "Are you sure your okay?" Estashia nodded her head rather stupidly, her heartbeat was beating out of control.

Jack moved in closer and now their noses were touching Estashia could feel Jack's dreadlocks caress her face, she smiled warmly, and closed her eyes, she couldn't believe it they were finally going to have their moment!

"Estashia? Oh...umm..oh god..Sorry!!", Rebecca looked utterly flustered, Estashia felt as if she could have hit her.

Jack lept off the bed in shock, and Estashia saw the look of disappointment in his eyes.

"Oh no! What have I done? I better go!" and with that Rebecca rushed from the room.

Jack and Estashia were quiet, and Jack said, "I best be off then."

"Yes" replied Estashia,

"Estashia?"

"Yes, Jack?", replied Estashia and with that Jack rushed towards her bed and took Estashia into his arms and gave her a long, lingering kiss. Jack suddenly tore them apart, and looked embaressed, "I'm so sorry, I couldn't help it." Estashia looked shocked and looked at Jack her eyes round. "I'm terribly sorry!" and with that Jack left the room.

**hehe, how did you like it? sorry i didn't put anytin about will and rebecca but when it's my turn you can be sure that i'll put in some stuff!!**

 

Chapter 10- Truth and Pain

 

            Rebecca sat at the ledge of the fort.  The sound of the waves crashing against the wall roared in her ears. Her hands were clasped tightly in front of her as the images of Estashia and Jack ran past her mind. “It’s not fair,” she thought to herself, “I am all alone now, Alison has the commodore Estashia has Jack and Im left alone.”

            Will slowly and quietly snuck up behind her, “If only he knew,” she whispered.

            “He does know, and he feels the same way,” Will whispered in her ear, wrapping his arms around her. The sound of his voice sent shivers up her spine.

            “I’m sorry Will I didn’t know you were there,” she said rather embarrassed braking away from his embrace.

            “It’s alright Rebecca,” Will smiled kindly to her.

            “So, er.. um I guess you know now about my…… crush,” she sighed looking down at the ground to afraid to look up at him.

            Will let out a little chuckle, “It doesn’t matter I knew already.”

“How,” she asked shocked.

“Its kind of obvious,” he smiled; Rebecca turned a bright red, “And Estashia and Alison told me.”

“They told you,” she said furious.

“Yes but anyway I wanted to tell you I feel the same way,” he walked up towards her. Will took Rebecca in his arms and held her close to him not wanting to let go of her ever. Rebecca felt finally at ease in his arms.

Once Estashia had gathered up enough strength she got up out of her bed and walked outside to watch the sunset. The smell of the sea tickled her nose as she step by step walked out side. The sunset was beautiful. The sky was splashed w/orange red and magenta.

“Beautiful aint’ it,” a voice said from beside her. She turned to see Jack Sparrow standing next to her his hands behind his back.

“Yes its very beautiful,” she smiled in agreement.

The two of them stood there for a while staring at the sunset. Being in Jack’s presence made Estashia at ease and happy. Estashia was to deep in thought that she didn’t notice Jack slowly move closer toward her.  Her thoughts were interrupted when she felt Jack put his arms around her waist gently pulling her closer towards him. She leaned back on him resting her head on his shoulder.  Just when Estashia felt that nothing could go wrong she felt a sharp stabbing pain in her side. She cried out falling down on her knees.

“Estashia are you alright,” Jack asked worried helping Estashia up.

“I don’t know,” she said weakly  holding her side.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~k im DONE! I cant write anymore!!

 

Chapter 11 A unknown foe

 

“Help! Rebecca! Alison! Will! Commodore!” He called hoping someone

would come and help.

 

Rebecca and Alison quickly came in at the same time.

                             “What is it?” they both said.

 

“Oh, my, goodness!” Yelled Alison, when she saw Estashia on the ground.

 

“What happened!?” Rebecca asked.

 

Estashia passed out from the pain. Jack quickly put her up on the bed.

“Get a doctor!” Alison screamed to Rebecca. Rebecca hurried out the

door. Will and Commodore had both been by the harbor when they heard

screaming. They immediately ran to the house. They passed Rebecca running

down the stairs.

 

“What’s wrong?” Will asked but she didn’t hear him and still kept

running.

 

 

“Rebecca!” Commodore called but she was out the door.

 

Will and Commodore looked at each other. They knew something was wrong.

They went into the room and saw Jack and Alison both by Estashia.

 

“Commodore!” Alison shouted and ran to him. “It’s Estashia. Something’s

wrong. We don’t know what it is. Rebecca went to get the doctor.” She

said running out of breath.

 

“Everything will be fine.” He told her.

 

The doctor finally came and was seeing what was wrong with Estashia.

Alison kept walking back and forth very nervously. Commodore walked up to

her.

 

“Shall we take a little walk?” He asked, trying to get her mind of

Estashia. Alison nodded. They walked out to the balcony over looking the

ocean. The sun was going down. It was so beautiful. “I know this is

torture for you, Alison. About us not being able to get married yet.

So…….I’m going to talk to your father.” He said. “Oh, James! You shouldn’t do

that just because of me whining!” She said to him. “It was not all

because of you. It was also torture for me. Even though I didn’t show it.”

He said softly. She smiled at him and then they kissed. Rebecca was

sitting on Will’s lap next to Estashia. Then the doctor got up and looked

at them. Commodore noticed and him and Alison came back into the room.

 

Then Alison and Rebecca followed the doctor.

 

“I don’t know what’s wrong with her. I’ll have to watch her for some

time.” He said and sighed, “But since I don’t know what is wrong. I don’t

know what to do!”

Chapter 12-- Hope and Magic

Estashia opened her eyelids and looked around her, near her on a chair lay Captain Jack Sparrow he looked awfully tired and beside him on the floor slept Rebecca and Alison. Estashia attempted to sit up but then yelled out in pain and lay back on the bed, Jack got up with a start and saw Estashia wincing with pain. He walked over quickly and asked in an extremely anxious voice "Are you okay?"

Estashia shook her head..."No, I'm not." Jack looked at her very concerned, Estashia then asked "What did the doctor say?"

"He doesn't know what it is.."

"Oh..."

Estashia heard some distant yawns and saw her two friends wake up they looked around and saw Estashia they came over and whispered to her as if she was lying on her death bed.."Are you alright?" Estashia looked up at them and grinned.."Guys! I'm not dying here!" and attempted to sit up again but to not avail she grunted and lay back again.

"Are you hungry?", inquired Jack

"Yea...a little.."

"I'll be right back", said Jack and walked out, but stopped on the doorway and turned around and grinned "Don't run off on me now!"

"Very funny!" said Estashia grinning back and stuck out her tounge!

As the three friends were on the bed talking about whatever came to mind, they were interrupted by a small knock which one could barely hear, Alison turned around and saw it was Will, she nudged Rebecca and Rebecca spun around, and Will motioned for her to come outside so Rebecca left. Will grabbed her by the arm and closed the door he had a look of joy on his face.

"What is it?" asked Rebecca confused at Will's jovial behavior.

"I met a healer, she just came off a ship just now and I bumped into her!"

"So??!??"

"Well...I thought since the doctor didn't know that maybe..."

Rebecca looked blankly at Will, they didn't even know this healer she could be some psycho murderer for all she knew. She sighed and said "I don't know Will.."

Will looked down and said, "We should ask Estashia..."

"Okay" and they both entered into the room, Estashia and Alison looked at them both, Estashia said, "Good day!" and Will said, "Good day to you too Estashia! How are you?" To which Estashia replied sarcastically, "Oh just great, never been better!" Will leaned intowards Rebecca and said, "At least she hasn't lost her sense of humor!"

Rebecca giggled, Will walked over to Estashia and said, "I think I might have found a person to cure you!"

Estashia bolted up straight...well actually...no she didn't she tried to but the agony was too much and she lay back down thoroughly put down by the fact that she couldn't sit up. She weakly said, "Who?" and Will proceeded to tell the story, but before he could tell Estashia the name of the curer Jack bustled in with a tray of food.

Jack looked around and said, "Your not trying to steal my girl their are you Will Turner?"

"Hehe! No Jack, I got a beautiful girl right there!" and he motioned towards Rebecca, Rebecca blushed. "Hehe! I suppose your right!" replied Jack and then asked "So! What were you talking about?"

"Oh! Will was just telling me about a healer who he met today! What was her name?" replied Estashia.

To which Will responded "Anna"

Jack almost fell over himself, he exclaimed, " I KNOW HER!!" Estashia looked at Jack and said "Who is she?"

"Oh no darling! It's not what you think! Hehe! Anna is my sister!!"

"YOU NEVER TOLD US THAT YOU HAD A SISTER!!" exclaimed Estashia.

"..well I'm telling you now amn't I?" replied a rather embaressed Jack., "But one things for sure, of all the years I have known my sister she is a really good healer and a great person!"

"Okay" replied a relieved Estashia, "Well I guess you better call her, I can't imagine this back getting worse."

"Right then" and Jack carried himself away.

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Alison and Rebecca sat around Estashias bed talking about their loves when a soft voice was heard Alison recognized it as the Commodores and went to the door, sure enough there he was he looked anxious and nervous and then told Alison, "Your father has called the both of us to his study." Alison's heart skipped a beat, she turned around and told Estashia that she would be back soon. In what seemed a matter of seconds Jack reentered the room and had a big grin on his face and said "Estashia, Alison, Will may I introduce you to my sister, Anna Sparrow" and he waved his arms around and in came a young girl who looked roughly around 13 she had long black hair and brown eyes she had a kind look and looked at Estahisa with a smile.

"Hello!" she said, "As you probably know I am Jack's sister. Jack interrupted, "My much younger sister!" and Anna interrupted Jack, "But much more mature." Jack smiled and said, "You got me there!" Estashia smiled she could see that Anna had Jack's sense of humor, she relaxed a bit.

"Well," said Anna, "better get to bussiness!" and with that she shooed everyone out and walked over to Estashia and laid down a basket which she had been holding and uncovered the contents which looked like a medley of herbs and liquids. Anna asked Estashia to turn around so that her back was facing Anna, this was easier said than done but thanks to Anna's helpful hands and manouevers Estashia found herself lying belly flat on the bed.

Anna then produced a golden liquid and gave it to Estashia to drink, as if reading Estashia's mind Anna said, "No, it's not rum, my brother would kill me if he thought I had some of his rum!" Estashia laughed and took a sip, instantly she felt a wave of peace flow through her and made her drowsy, suddenly everything went black and Estashia went comfortably numb.

**HEHE!! I CAN'T WRITE ANYMORE HOPE U LIKED IT!!! I'LL PUT MORE LOVE STUFF IN AFTER ESTASHIA HOPEFULLY GETS BETTER!!**

Chapter 13: A chapter about Estashia and Jack J (heh heh)

            When Estashia awoke the pain in her back was gone. She looked to her side where Jack sat on a chair asleep. She smiled at herself as she slowly slipped out of her bed, she was glad she could even sit up. Her first few steps were a little wobbly but she soon got the hang of it. She slowly walked over to Jack’s side and knelt down beside him. She moved one of his dreadlocks to out of his face and kissed his cheek lightly. Her light kiss stirred him from his sleep. He got up off his chair and carefully picked her up holding onto her tightly.

            “Would you like to go and see the sunrise,” he asked her.

            “Sure,” she smiled wrapping her arms around his neck.

He gently carried her outside onto the balcony where the sun was just barely rising. The gently breeze made Estashia shiver a little bit.  Jack felt her shiver so he held her closer towards him.  The smell of rum stung Estashia’s nose but she didn’t mind, she was w/Jack and that’s all she wanted.  She looked up into his eyes, she leaned up towards him, she could feel his warm breath on her face. She slowly closed her eyes, she leaned towards him until finally their lips met.  In the midst of their kiss Anna walked up towards them.

            She gently tapped Jack on the shoulder, “Excuse me,” she interrupted. Jack jumped back away from Estashia.

            “Oh hi Anna love,” he smiled at Anna. Anna just raised her eyebrow at Jack.

            “So Ms. Estashia, did Jack ever tell you about his girlfriend waiting for him to come back so she can marry him,” she walked up next to Estashia.

            “Really? Who is she Jack,” Estashia looked mad.

            “No one Estashia….” Jack looked guilty.

            “No one!? Well she certainly was someone when you purposed to her,” Anna shot out.

            “I cant believe I even thought you loved me,” Estashia screamed at Jack slapping him across the face before she stormed away.

~~~**** P. Eless here heh heh stupid Jack!! JK I LUV YOU JACK!!

Chapter 14 Joy and Anger

Alison sat in the study. She couldn’t breathe. She was so nerves. She
held onto to the Commodore’s hand. He smiled but inside he was really
nerves himself. Finally the governor spoke.
        “I know that both of you would like to get married right away,
but, as I said, Alison is too young. But then I remembered that her
birthday was coming up in one week. And she is going to be 16………” He
paused for a moment. Alison thought she would die!
        “And I think that would be the proper age to get married at!”
He said with a smile.
        “Oh thank you father!” She said getting up and giving him a
huge hug.
        “Yes. Thank you so much Gov. Swann.” Commodore said with a
smile.
Meanwhile, Estashia ran down the stairs in anger. She bumped into
Rebecca and Will who were talking in the hall.
        “What’s wrong?” Asked Rebecca.
        “Jack loves another girl! Can you believe that!?” Estashia
said. She was both angry and sad. She didn’t know what to do.
Alison and Commodore both came out of the study at the same time. She
was holding his arm but quickly let go when she saw Will, Rebecca and
Estashia.
        “We can get married!!!! We’re going to get married next week!”
Said Alison running to them. Then she saw that something was not right.
“What happened, Estashia?” Alison asked concerned.

To Be Continued………………………….

Chapter 13---A past revealed

Unaware of the mayhem errupting between her friends Rebecca walked aimlessly around Port Royal, Will had disappeared, she went over to trinket store and was looking through the various collection of beautiful antique jewlery, she gasped and laid her trembling hand on a delicate sliver necklace; it was gorgeous, it gleamed in the morning rays and on it clung a beautiful locket in the shape of a heart, and engraved was some foliage and flowers she saw that there was a groove to the side and almost shrieked with delight as she opened it to reveal two picture frames, a rough voice interrupted Rebecca's enthusiasm, "Missy, you can have two peoples names engraved in that their silver."

Rebecca looked up sadly at the man and laid down the necklace and said, "Oh no! I was just looking," and took a last look at the necklace and walked on, and without realizing bumped into Will! Will grinned, Rebecca looked up and asked, "Where were you?"

"Oh nowhere!" replied Will, "Shall we walk around?" and without waitng for Rebecca to reply he yanked her arm and they started to walk around the harbour, "Lovely day isn't it?" remarked Will.

"Oh yes!", gushed Rebecca, and indeed it was the blue, blue sea of jamaica was sparkling as tho encrusted with diamonds and sapphires, the twinkling light blue sky almost cloudless with a magnificent sun shining down on them, the distant ships peacefully sailing away, the distant humming roar of the busy market, and the lush green grass on which they lay down upon. Will moved in closer and added rather slyly, "and what makes it more lovelier is that your here beside me." Rebecca blushed.

Will pecked Rebecca on her cheek, and laid his head on Rebecca's lap, Rebecca stroked Will's brown hair and Will closed his eyes and let the peace, serenity and love consume him. Rebecca looked at Will's peaceful features and a great well of desire constantly being filled was overflowing, she bent down and kissed Will lightly on the forehead, Will's nose wrinkled up and he opened his eyes, he smiled gently and said, "Your hair is ticklish!"

Rebecca laughed, Rebecca suddenly got up, Will looked at her she walked along the grass and stopped, she did not know why but she just did, she heard Will get up and make his way towards her, he wrapped his arms boldly around her waist and buried his head in her hair. Rebecca stood still, she didn't want this moment to end, Will then wheeled Rebecca around and looked at her for a minute, Rebecca looked back at Will, and then it finally happened, for what seemed to be eternity to Rebecca, Will leaned in, Rebecca thought she was going to die, and then suddenly Will pushed Rebecca, Rebecca tumbled into the water with a splash, she looked at Will with surprise on her face, Will started to laugh, Rebecca smiled and motioned Will to come over and help her out, Will came over and extended his hand, Rebecca grinned and before Will knew *SPLASH* in he came too!

Rebecca laughed and Will joined in too, Will then grabbed Rebecca's head and just pressed his lips against hers, and there they were, two lovers soaked to the bone, kissing in a harbor.

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Jack shouted angrily at Anna, "What on earth did you tell Estashia that for???!!!?"

Anna looked up calmly at Jack and said, "Well, she should know shouldn't she??"

"No!, I love her, and I don't even care about Joesephine anymore!" retorted Jack.

Anna looked up at her brother and said coldly, "So you wanted your love to go through her life not knowing that somewhere in this world their is a lady who will not sleep, will not speak until a man called Captain Jack Sparrow will come back and marry her?"

Jack looked at Anna aghast, "What??!?!?"

Anna stared Jack straight in the eye and said, "Jack...", but Jack would hear none of it, "Well if Joesephine's gonna do that, suits me just fine, I didn't ask her to do it so why should I care??"

Anna softly said, "She died." Jack turned around and looked wildly at Anna, "WHAT??" Anna repeated it "She died, lack of nourishment, I tried to heal her but.." she faltered and sat down and buried her face into her lap.

Jack knelt down with a confused look on his face, Anna never knew about Joesephine, "How did you know?" he asked softly too Anna, Anna sniffled and looked at Jack, "She told me, on her death bed." Jack then asked, "Anna, love, you only met her just then! Why are you crying so much?" Jack was scared, he knew Anna well, and Anna was a strong person she never cried and sometimes Jack felt that Anna was made of stone, she cared, and was kind but she never let anything get her down.

Jack grabbed Anna by the arm and asked more harder, "ANNA, what's the matter???" Anna looked up she knew it was hopeless, she knew Jack would find out anyway, she sighed and said, "Jack...I haven't told you something in a long while." Jack looked at her with a bewildered face, "What?" Anna sighed and told Jack about a young man who she had fallen in love with and he was very nice and everything, he told her that he wanted to get married to her, so they did, and that's when he started to show his true colors, he lefted home early, came back late and when he came back he was drunk and started to beat her up, everytime he would say he was sorry and the rest of it, and each time Anna would take him back, and then one day he left the house and Anna escaped, she took the earliest ship and sailed to Port Royal.

Jack didn't say a word he just took Anna and gave her a big hug, he then looked at her and Anna understood what he was looking for she rolled up her sleave and Jack saw scars, bruises and cut marks. There was a knock on the door, Anna pulled dow