This is my Big Writes area. It will have all my big completed stories in it. When I finish them they come here so that everyone can see. Hope you like :)
Here's a sneak preview. If you want to read all 20 Pages, you gonna have to DL it from my site.
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You probably have heard of zodiac signs which describe a person’s strengths and weaknesses, some physical traits, and your perfect love partner according to yours and their zodiac sign. Elements, compared to the zodiacs, are far more different. They can describe in greater detail, such as specialized months of your birth, how the element shows you to be who you are as an individual, personality and physical quirks, best months and days where a power can thrive, and your good/bad points you should watch out in yourself. Elements do not show what your day shall bring, but they can make you see inside yourself a little bit more.
Every person is born with elements, major and a minor elements or powers. The major element gives you some behavior patterns to look upon to determine their element. This can show the person’s predictability in certain situations, and how they might respond to it. The minor element basically describes a person’s health, their good/bad points and/or energies about themselves, and can determine a person’s vulnerability, and shows in some cases what the person may become in the nearer future thirty days or even thirty years from now. With these two elements, they can show many things a person hasn’t really noticed about themselves before unless a friend of theirs tells them otherwise. This can be a good thing in some cases because then a person may or may not get a chance to fix any problems they have that could alter their behavior patterns and make things worse.
Here are all of the major elements that are common, and can be found in most people:
Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Light, and Darkness.
Here are all of the major elements that are uncommon, and can be found in other people:
Sun
, Moon, Stars, Poison, Ice, and Crystal.Here are all of the minor elements that are common, and be found in most people: Stone, Jewel, Forest, Spirit, Rain, Thunder, and Cloud.
Here are all of the minor elements that are uncommon, and can be found in other people: Soul, Crown, Sky, Reflection, and Haze.
Not everyone in the world has the basic package, one major and minor element, when they are born. The smallest number of elements for a person could have is two, but sometimes you don’t get one minor and one major element. You could get two majors, two minors. A person can have up to five elements. You could also have elements in a certain combination like two major elements and one minor. The rarest combination a person could have would be all minor elements. You may think that this makes you different in a bad way, but really, it can make you stand out in a positive way to your peers or family. This can mean you may have a special gift or talent you enjoy doing, or your personality may show something a potential mate may adore about you. Keep in mind though abnormal weaknesses may show as well as good things, so bare with your mind and don’t think badly of yourself.
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http://www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/Adventure Of The Elements.zip
Adventure in the Elements is not a long write, but its a long story. I was debating on whether to put this in Incomplete or not, but I put it here because it was not under my choice for this story to end (Fucker mod closed it). What this zip file contains an Role playing story I was in back when I was 16, 17. I did it with Jon, Jason and various other people from the old forum called Superbard. Just to clear things up:
Darkness - Jon, Dragoon - Jason, TigerLily013 - me.
This is my part of the page where I put up some of my short stories I write as well as any work friends give to me. If you would like to DL my work, then be my guest.
If you have trouble reading any of the files, what usually works for me is either copying and pasting the text into notepad with word wrap on, or downloading the file and having word wrap on. Either way works best for you.
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www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/ShortStory1RLW.txt
This is "Seperation with Light"
Preview:
Seperation With Light
By Rebecca Warner
Feeling the last moments before the blast, huddled in a corner of a street wall, the couple cuddled each other knowing the end would soon be near. They would not let each other go for anything else in the remaining time they had left. Others were hiding underneath cars and stayed in their homes, and even some people made bombshelters. Sadly, even with the extra efforts, noone in that area would survive, not even the couple holding one another in their arms. The man looked into his love's eyes, seeing much fear, not knowing what will happen. She could see the same in his. She finally spoke, "No matter what happens, I will not be alone, and you will not either. We will find each other", as her eyes misted over. He held her close. "I love you with all my heart. It does not matter what happens to our existance, we will find each other past this life. This love is stronger than any nuclear blast." They looked into one another's eyes, seeing the love that they longer for and always had gotten. The woman leaned in, kissing her partner passionately, wrapping her arms around him. He embraced her in his hold and hers, in another kiss. The strong wave of energy surged through the area, incinerating the city that both people and others grew up in. There, people were killed instantly. Strangely, the wall and the corner the couple were in remained standing, leaving the shadows to remain on the wall's surface.
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www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/ShortStory2RLW.txt
This is "Society from East to West"
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Society from East to West
By Rebecca L. Warner
They were called The Karsian Society. Figures who stood in ceremonial dressings, their hair cloaked by shimmering head garmets, their feet, of golden yellow, stained wooden sandles, and their thoughts on their new age, their society, the females of tomorrow. The Karsian Society was composed of only females. Amazons couldn't even depict the grace of a Karsian maiden. They danced so gracefully, the swans in the lake by their quarters became jealous. These women were proud women, who didn't need anyone else but themselves and each other. They lived in isolation on the far east side of the Nia Lake. Since they lived on the east side, every morning they lined up before the premature sunrise, and watch the orange and red glory in the sun's awakening. They worshipped the sun, for its ever lasting power during the day, its independence, its freedom. They showed compassion for any female in the passing area and always opened its doors for broken soul maidens that needed to find themselves, because in the Karsian Society, the soul of a woman was important.
The Oshrah Clan. Shadows of goodwill towards man, who stand by each other, who ruled supreme as warriors. Their metals and armours were silver as the moon, and their attire was as dark as night for this is what they believed was the great power, The Moon. A society composed of only males, they hunted to survive. If you were not the hunter, you were the hunted. Blood and death was not new to them but only honour of death was given to men in their group or ones who allied with the Oshrah. They didn't need anyone else by themselves. These men were so strong willed in the use of a sword, fish in the Nia lake would tremble when sensing the vibrations of footsteps who belonged to an Oshrah male. Their quarters were the far west side of the lake, which is why every evening, they lined the lake to watch the distasteful Sun, belonging to the Karsians, go into its slumber and watch as they god, the moon, rise to greet them with another night of successful hunt. When taking a man under the Oshrah wing, they had to be tested with skill and accuracy before joining the group, because to the Oshrah, the strength was found in only the soul of a man.
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www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/Clarity-RLW.txt
"Clarity" is based on the inner mental and spiritual struggle I had with myself during and after the friendship with Pennee Mellor. Has sound advice for all who need help to move on and accept.
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It's been a long time since I was once friends with Pennee Mellor. In the beginning we were the closest ever, like sisters in a way. It just went downhill for some reason. It not only went downhill on our friendship, but on my mental stableness as well. She gave me so much grief to grieve over, and at one point she almost broke me down. Note the word almost. From close to my psychological death, I rose from the ashes of despair. I was ressurected once I stopped being friends with her, which seemed too easy at the time and still does.
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www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/R-story1.txt
Friend of mine asked me to do an erotica for them, so I did. I find this story something I really achieved because before this one, I only did my stories like this in third person (like someone would be watching the characters). In this case, its in the perspective of a male. You can use your imagination on this one.
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She leaded me down the wooden steps leading to her basement. It was very dim lit, and I just did not want to turn into a klutz and trip down the stairs...even though she just didn't care. I couldn't see her face at all in the little light, but I knew she was smiling. I felt her run her fingers across my palm as we reached the basement. It was even darker than the stairs, but it seemed like she knew where she was going.
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www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/Once%20upon%20a%20time.txt
I decided to write this because I need to express myself with the things that have gone on, and to help anyone distinguish a fantasy from reality. I share my experience with this story "Once Upon A Time".
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Once upon a time, there was a girl and there was a boy. They cared for each other very much and became the best of friends. They talked about everything. Movies, sports, video games, computers...you name it and they talked about it. They really enjoyed each other's company.
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http://www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/clock maker.doc
This piece of work was done by Jon himself. I will say now this is incredibly old, he wrote this when we were around 14, 15, maybe 16ish...back at that age where we mispell a lot of words and replace you with "u". It could of easily been editted and fixed by me before uploading it, but I wanted to hold on to its autheniticity, to preserve this part of the past. It really shows you even if you mispell a lot of stuff, if you look hard enough you can see the story's meaning...and as you can see Jon was very ahead of his time...no not in the grammarical bit of writing, but the thought process (Yes I know I just did a run-on sentence).
http://www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/Angel's Advocate.doc
This is a story I made a year or so ago. I never got to completing it because of the breakup, that and I just got lazy. I created this story after I had a dream one night which seemed to have all the pieces come together. I suggest you take a read.
http://www.freewebs.com/rlw_palace/Hell on earth.doc
This story is actually a few years old. If I can recall correctly...Jon created said story back when he was unemployed...so I am guessing later on in 2002, early 2003. Jonathan wrote this story mostly because he couldn't just sit around all day, so he thought writing would scratch that itch he had, and it did help. This document was edited by me several times while he was writing it, so there should not be many spelling mistakes, only punctuation mistakes here and there ;) lol. Still, it's a good read. Jon had to stop writing it because work became very important to him, that and he couldn't continue after a long stall. Shame really.