Opinions?

So I'm thinking about almost completely changing a good portion of this story. If you would please tell me if you think that is a good idea or not, I would really appreciate it. You can either tell me in the guestbook or e-mail what you have to say to me.

Fayth_Nightmare@hotmail.com

Chapters

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven