The Hidden Cookie

Fiction and graphics by me!

IMPORTANT NOTE!!!

This is an old story which I have stopped writing, and probably won't ever continue.  This is for a number of reasons, but mostly because I didn't have the plot figured out ahead of time and couldn't get it to fit together.  So, before you start to read, be aware that it will very likely never be finished.

The Blood Tree is the new version of this story.  It follows along the same basic lines, but has a more complex plot.

Allegiances

Tribe of Whispering Winds

Healer: Shadeteller - Black and white bicolored she-cat.
To-Be: Lily

Lead Tree-Guard: Blazing Fire in Starless Night (Blaze) - Bright orange tabby tom with very dark stripes.
To-Be: Cloud

Lead Prey-Catcher: Morning Dew on Blade of Grass (Dew) - Cream colored she-cat with silver tinted paws, tail tip, and face.

Tree-Guards:

Wind That Stirs Leaves (Wind) - Brown tabby tom with green eyes.

Stone in Deserted Territory (Stone) - Gray shorthair tom with a dull pelt.

Field of New Flowers (Field) - Pale orange tabby she-cat with faint stripes.
To-Be: Ghost

Prey-Catchers:

Crystal Stream of Silky Waters (Crystal) - Jet black she-cat with blue eyes.
To-Be: Thorn

Flicker of Hope That Never Goes Out (Hope) - Jet black she-cat whose tail tip is bright orange.

Shadow of Soaring Eagle (Shadow) - Dark gray tom.

To-Be Tree-Guards:

Cloud Where Storms Gather (Cloud) - Pale gray tom with sky blue eyes.

Ghost That Haunts The Night (Ghost) - Silver tom with unusual bright purple eyes and black paws and tail tip.

Ash Of Flames That Burned Brightly (Ash) - Smoky gray tom with pale blue eyes.

To-Be Prey-Catchers:

Lily On Tiger Pond (Lily) - Mostly brown tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes.

Thorn That Protects Roses (Thorn) - Dark brown tabby tom.

Mothers:

Sunlight That Warms the Morning (Sunlight) - Calico she-cat with blue eyes.

New-Borns:

Flower - Ginger she-cat with green eyes.

Gale - Black and white tuxedo pattern tom.

Spirit - Deaf white tom with blue eyes.

Part 1 - The Calm Before The Storm

Prologue - Ghost

     Silent black paws padded swiftly along the lush forest floor. Small puffs of fog appeared in front of him as he trotted along though the crisp air. All around him were shadows. Eyes burned into his pelt, but when he turned to look there was nothing. He didn't know where he was or why he was here, but he knew that it was his sister's doing.

     His gait slowed to a walk, then to a standstill. Purple eyes swept over the clearing. He was in the middle of a small circle of grass surrounded by trees and low bushes. It would be all too easy for someone to be lurking nearby, but that didn't frighten the young cat. He had been aware of being followed, and he could sense that he wasn't in danger. At least, not for the moment.

     The clouds parted to reveal a full moon, which shone down onto the earth, making everything look brighter. In front of him was a silver she-cat with violet eyes identical to his. She glowed with starlight, but her expression was sad. “I've been waiting for you,” she muttered, her voice distant.

     “I'm sorry,” the tom meowed “Soul, please, I tried!” The she-cat known as Soul didn't answer, but her face full of sorrow spoke for her. Seeing as she wasn't answering, he went on. “If only I had known, if only I had listened!”

     Tears welled up in his eyes and spilled over, then rolled down his cheek and dropped onto the ground. “It's still not too late...” Soul rasped softly “Don't give up...” The light slowly faded from her eyes and pelt. She seemed to be melting into the shadows of which she had appeared so suddenly. “You know what to do...” she muttered before fading away completely.

     “No! No, Soul, come back!” the silver gray tom yowled as his sister disappeared. “Don't leave me! I don't understand, I don't know what you want me to do!” He cried into the night, but his words seemed to be swallowed by a sea of black. The world began to spin around him. “No...”


Chapter 1


     Cloud's fur prickled with excitement. Today he would become a Tree-Guard. All around him were the cats of the Tribe of Whispering Winds.

     In front of him stood a smooth, wide tree. The sunlight reflected off it's wet surface, creating a glare that he couldn't look at directly, but as a New-Born he had slipped away one night and felt it's smooth surface.

     Though no cat really knew how it got so wet, the oldest Prey-Catchers and Tree-Guards had told him many stories. They said that this whole area had once been a lake, and when it dried up this one tree stayed wet to remind the tribe of that time.  He knew that never really happened, even if everyone else believed their stories for New-Borns.

     "Cloud Where Storms Gather, please step forward." the voice of Shadeteller, the tribe's healer, rang out loud and clear. All eyes turned to him, and he raised his head proudly.

     "You have trained hard and learned well, and are ready for your final test. Your task is to climb this tree and sit at the top until nightfall. Will you do this?" she paused to look him in the eye, "Remember that you may not touch the ground once your paws have left it."

     Her words made him shiver as he remembered what would happen if he failed. This test was his future. Everything he had to live for depended on it.  If he failed, all his hopes and dreams would be shattered in an instant.

     "I will." he said, trying to sound more confident then he felt. At his words Shadeteller stepped aside to let him pass. He felt many eyes burning into his fur. He licked his paw nervously.  Having never liked being the center of attention, this was especially bad because of all that was at stake.  This time there was no room for failure, and every cat in the Tribe knew it.

     Taking a deep breath, he looked once more at the task in front of him. He didn't really think it would be very hard, though Tree-Guards had told him not to take it lightly. He rocked his weight back and forth, starting to gage the jump.
Ready or not, here... I... come... he mumbled to himself as he bunched up his muscles and leaped.


Chapter 2

     He met the wood with unsheathed claws, which he tried to dig into the bark, but it was so smooth they didn't go far.
     Don't look down, he told himself as he carefully lifted a paw, firmly setting it into the wood. After a bit of trying he realized that slowly wouldn't work. For every time he got a pawstep closer to the top, he slid down two.

     Now only a fox-length from the ground, he started to panic. His paws worked furiously to get him up the trunk, and slowly he ascended.

     There was an unreal quality in everything he did, like a dream that he couldn't wake up from. The view was amazing, even though he wasn't even half way up. The endless forest stretched as far as he could see. Morning dew still clung to the leaves, sparkling their encouragement.

     Momentarily stunned by the view, he lost his footing. He felt himself sliding down and down and down. Barely recovering in time to save himself and his pride, he started up again, but just then a gust of wind blew.

     The blast of cold morning air hit him all at once. A silent yowl of alarm escaped him as he was pushed completely off the trunk. He had never been so scared in his life, and he silently prayed to the Tribe of Endless Hunting to help him.

     When he hit the ground he couldn't keep from trembling, but was otherwise unharmed. The first thing he felt was relief that it was over, but that was before he looked around. The cats of his tribe were all around him, hostility glaring in their eyes. He heard Shadeteller's war cry as she lunged for him.


Chapter 3

     One pair of eyes stood out from the rest. They were a deep and pure amber, but they showed no signs of hostility. At first he thought they belonged to his sister, but then he remembered with a pang of sadness that she was dead. He couldn't help thinking that they were the most beautiful eyes in the world, even as he stood ready to die.

     The memories and thoughts passed through him in an instant, and he closed his eyes, ready for the pain.
     This is it, he thought the last time I'll see her... or anything else.

     Opening his eyes again, he realized that this wasn't what he wanted. Though he knew that the honorable thing to do would be to accept his death, he wasn't ready. Not yet. He hadn't had enough time to live, to do what he wanted with his life. It wasn't fair for his tribe to take that away from him. He wouldn't let them.

     In a heartbeat he had sprung into action, slashing the nearest cat. He heard a yowl, shortly followed by a gasp, and he realized that the cat he had attacked was Shadeteller. Attacking a healer was the worst thing for a cat to do, especially when they were already in trouble. He knew he too should be shocked, but he didn't care, because that pause was just what he needed to get away.

     He ran faster than he ever had in his life. Cats of his tribe yowled after him, but none gave chase. They knew he wouldn't come back, and if he did they wouldn't let him escape again.  Ghost's furious cry rang out louder than all the other.  The To-Be spat insults at him, but Cloud took no notice.

     After running all out for what seemed forever he slowed to a trot and stopped. He had no idea what he would do now, but he didn't care.  All that mattered was that he was alive, and that he was free of the Tribe.  Free to think and believe what he wanted.  Changing his name seemed like a good idea, especially if he decided to get even with his Tribe.  He was no longer young, innocent Cloud from the Tribe of Whispering Winds.  Now he was Storm, and he was all alone.


Chapter 4

     Storm suddenly got a surge of energy, and shot forward. He felt like he was flying.  The wind brushed against his face, the soft ground below him just slipped right by.  Nothing could stop him. He gave a triumphant yowl as a hawk flew high above him. It screeched loudly, then zoomed ahead of him. A challenge. Storm loved challenges, so he sped up.

     Now everything was a blur, nothing was left in the world except him and the hawk. Their race went on, getting faster as they went. Then the huge bird dove straight down, straight at him.

     A yowl of alarm escaped him, and he ducked just in time to avoid a blow at his head. He looked up, but kept running. The hawk was right above him, coming down for a second attack. This time he stopped and skidded over the ground. He smiled as his attacker got a mouth full of dirt.

     This time when he ran it wasn't out of joy, but fear. He didn't want to get eaten, so he kept at it. This time the wind wasn't brushing against his face, it was blowing at him full force, as though it wanted him to fail. It wanted him to get eaten. The springy ground suddenly became squishy, which slowed him down more.

     Everything was against him. Maybe he was being punished for not accepting his fate. The Tribe of Endless Hunting was surely mad at him. He knew this was the end, but that only made him push himself harder.

     In pure desperation, he begged for forgiveness and mercy from his ancestors, a Tribe he didn't believe in.
     You've had your chance, they seemed to reply You never believed in us until you needed us.  We're just a New-Born's tale, remember?  You've defied you Healer when she was following the rules we set down.  Now instead of dying with honor, you shall die a failure.

     He felt claws sinking into his back, but the pain was soon forgotten as he was lifted off the ground. Claws unsheathed, he squirmed and clawed and struggled with all his might, but the hawk didn't seem to notice as they flew higher and higher.
     Failure, Failure, the words rang in his ears.

     The wish of flying left him completely, replacing it was the desire to be back home in his tree.  He wished he could undo his failure.  He wished he could have a second chance.  But most of all he wished to be with Lily.  Surely she would never love him again, not after what he did.  He was momentarily blinded by her amber eyes, which appeared in front of him.  She muttered something, which he at first thought was that she was forgiving him.
     Failure, failure... her voice muttered, dripping with so much hatred he hardly recognized it as hers.  He was a disgrace to the Tribe, and he deserved to die.


Chapter 5

     Lily stared at the wall of her family's tree blankly, her amber eyes distant and dull. A tear rolled down her cheek, which was soon followed by another. And another. And another.
     Oh Cloud, if only I could be where you are. I don't care where that is, as long as I'm with you. She sighed, and turned her attention to the ground.  But how can I leave the tribe? As Shadeteller's To-be, who would be the next healer?

     A small sound came from behind her, and the smell of her brother reached her. The few moments of silence seemed to last forever, until at last Ash spoke.
     "You love him, don't you?"

     Any other time Lily would have either snapped at him or made a joke out of it, but not it was different. This time things were serious, so she lowered her head and replied softly.
     "Yes." She waited tensely for his answer, but when it didn't come she looked up to read his face.

     Surprisingly he was nodding, accepting her decision.
     "You know you have to go. You'd never live with yourself if you didn't."
     "But I can't. Who would be the next healer? And I'd miss your ceremony. If there's one thing I wouldn't be able to live with, it would be missing my own brother's ceremony."
     "Lily, you've been staring at that wall ever since Cloud's test."

     When she didn't reply he gently lifted her head with his paw. His pale blue eyes were so understanding, so warm. It was scary, so she turned away. Suddenly when he spoke there was a new gentleness. Something else was there too, something impossible to describe. She only heard his last few words.
     "Please. If you won't do it for yourself, then do it for me. Do it for the tribe, Shadeteller isn't going anywhere, and you love him." He paused, "Do it for Cloud."

     Lily rose onto shaky legs. She looked into his eyes again, and saw that he was serious.
     "Okay." she whispered, and gave him one last lick goodbye before dashing to the entrance of their tree.
     "Don't look back." he called after her, so she kept her eyes fixed on what was in front of her.
     Ash... I love you... so much. I never knew you understood.

     Tears welled up in her eyes, but she forced them back.
     No time for crying, I have to save Cloud.


Chapter 6

     The first thing Storm saw when he came to was a huge hawk head, it's beady eyes staring at him curiously. He scrambled to his paws, only to fall back down again. He had to run, surely that...  that thing planned on eating him. It's jaws opened, coming at him. He closed his eyes, sure of what was coming next.
     Please forgive me, he begged the Tribe of Endless Hunting I know I don't deserve it, I'm a lying, disloyal murderer, but please... please...
His prayers faded out, and he was still alive. His eyes opened into thin blue slits, and all his senses flooded back to him. He leaped to his paws and ran across the sticks and twigs woven together to create a nest, hawk eyes burning into his fur. He leaped over the edge, not knowing or caring where he was going.

     Free at last! He was flying, light as a feather. He could feel the wind pressing up against his fur. His spirits lifted, but a sinking feeling lingered in his stomach, making him want to puke. It was just then that he realized he wasn't flying, he was falling. At first he was too shocked to do anything, then his first thought was,
     I actually jumped off a cliff... right off the edge.

     Panic washed over him in waves, each stronger than the last. He couldn't see the bottom, the icy fog was too thick. Suddenly everything stopped. Pain shot through his whole body, though he was too shocked to notice it. He was alive, and that was all that mattered for the moment.

     He couldn't quite be sure how long he just stayed there, it felt like forever, and at the same time like no time had passed. Everything just stopped, time itself froze. After some amount of time his senses slowly returned to him. He looked down and saw what had saved his life. All that stood between him and the seemingly bottomless pit that would swallow him whole was a flimsy bush, hanging off of the side of the cliff. He held his breath, barely daring to breathe.

     Slowly, he inched forward toward the base of his lifeline. A crack from in front of him. He froze, anyone who passed by might mistake him for a glob of dirty snow, if it had been during freeze-time. A few moments of nothing, then he let out a sigh. Big mistake. The branch snapped off, and he started falling again, claws out and scrabbling against the cliff wall, desperately searching for a hold. His claws snagged painfully, loose rocks getting stuck between his toes. Blood stained his gray fur, making him yowl out in pain and let go. Everything faded out into darkness and his unconscious body disappeared into the fog.


Part 2 - Gathering Storm


Prologue - Spirit

     Blue eyes darted back and forth across the clearing. Soundless ears swiveled, as though maybe if they listened hard enough, they would hear a sign to show he was still alive. The hazy black fog that hung over the moonless night smelled rank and musky. His tiny lungs struggled with each breath, and he felt as though he were drowning in a sea of black.

     “Spirit...” a voice behind him called. Instinct made him whip around to face whatever it was. “Spirit...” The lonely voice called his name again.

     It was so strange and different, he couldn't tell what it was. A voice, he thought, Is this how everyone else knows the world?

     The voice kept repeating it's eerie call, getting louder each time. His ears started to hum, then ring, then ache with a dull pain he knew only in his dreams. The mist blackened until he couldn't see, feel, smell, or even taste anything but its cold, empty darkness that turned his snow white pelt black.

     The only thing he could do was listen to his name being called. Was it his name? Yes, it had to be his name, what else could it be? All his senses dulled and the mist seemed to retreat, though everything remained just as black and lifeless.

     Something sharp prodded Spirit in the side. He opened his eyes and found himself safe and sound in the New-Born's Tree. “Spirit.” the small white kit muttered, his blue eyes glowing with starlight.

     “Yes, that's your name.” the calico queen replied, “Now, why don't you go and play with Storm and Flower?”

     “Sunlight... I don't understand. Why am I different?” Spirit asked, having not understood any of what the she-cat he knew as his mother had said to him.

     “Just... Just run along now.” Sunlight answered, then gave him a small nudge towards the door to show what she wanted. Spirit obeyed, but still remained confused. What was that strange hum he heard in his dream calling his name? And why did the other kits seem to know more than he did?

     When Spirit had left, Sunlight remained alone in the den. “Oh Spirit,” she muttered to herself “Why did your mother have to die? Why do I have to keep pretending you're my kit when you aren't? How can you live without knowing your real mother, or about your deafness? I'm sure she would've been able to raise you better than I am. She was so good with her first litter.”




Chapter 7
     Blue eyes opened, but saw nothing but darkness. The air was thick and pasty, and the tom's lungs had to work hard with every breath. A shallow and uneven heartbeat pounded, making his ears buzz. His whole body throbbed with a burning pain. Was this what it was like to die? No, the Seniors had said that it was a bright, fresh forest with prey that practically leaped into a cat's mouth.
     Then this must be the place where evil cats go, he mused, But if that's true then that means...

     A cold feeling of dread washed over him. His body quivered with fear, and he felt smaller than ever. What else was in this horrible dark place? Were there monsters who would hunt him down and eat him forever? He hated to think of the cats who would also be here. A vivid image of huge felines covered in scars filled his mind. Their unsheathed claws and deadly fangs were dripping with blood that smelled of cat.

     Just as he was picturing himself being ripped to shreds by terrifying beasts, a small cluster of sparkles appeared before him. They shone brightly and began to arrange themselves into the shape of a cat. Then then seemed to melt into one starry shape that was all too familiar to Storm. He let out an involuntary gasp, and as he did so he noticed that with the cat had come a sweet scent.

     “Soul,” he said softly, his voice filled with awe before he realized why she would be here. His eyes grew wide and his voice was filled with fear and panic when he spoke, “I-”
     Before he could begin to explain the she-cat flicked her tail for him to be silent, and he obeyed immediately. Instead he looked at the she-cat, taking in her appearance. She looked exactly as she had when they were alive, the only difference being that her beautiful silver pelt, ebony paws, and stunning purple eyes now glowed with starlight.

     “I am not here to punish you,” she said. Storm felt so much relief at her words that his legs felt as though they would collapse under his weight.
     “You're not mad at me?” he asked, knowing he must look bewildered. Soul smiled and shook her head.
     “Go back, Storm,” her voice suddenly seemed distant, as though it wasn't really her who was speaking, “Your time hasn't come yet. Go back and finish your life.”
     She's giving me another chance, he thought miserably.  I don't deserve it, especially not from her.   It must've shown on his face, because she gave him a small smile before slowly fading and separating into many stars, which flew away swiftly.




Chapter 8
     Storm started to take another deep breath of air, but he stopped halfway through and began to cough. The air was close and rank, and it was drowning him. Breathing became so hard that he stopped coughing and began to gag. He knew he was flailing wildly, but he couldn't feel himself hitting anything.

     A sharp pain drove into his side, causing him to let out a yowl. The air was breathable once more, but the smell was awful and he ached again, especially where he had hit the sharp rock. He forced his eyes open and found himself in a lush forest. It was morning, and a thin layer of frost still covered everything, making a beautiful scene.

     But that wasn't what Storm was looking it. His eyes were round as he stared up at a huge, muscular creature. Its fur looked dirty and coarse, and its small beady eyes stared into his. A set of large, yellow teeth filled its mouth. That enormous mouth opened and it let out a ferocious roar, blasting him with a stench that was overpowering.

     Storm's claws came out and slashed at its nose. The huge creature let out a rumbling cry of pain and reared up onto its hind legs. A powerful arm drew back, winding up for an attack, but the tom wasn't about to stick around and wait for it. All aches were forgotten as he scrambled out of the way, narrowly avoiding being hit.

     The gray cat darted off, his legs carrying him as fast as he could make them. Though he didn't look back, he could tell that the monster was right behind him from all the noise it made as it crashed through the small bushes that Storm was able to jump over. He could tell that it was catching up with him, and that there was nothing he could do about it.

     She wanted me to die a slow, painful death, he thought bitterly, That's why she told me to come back here. Well, I'll show her! New life burst into his limb as he made a dash for the nearest tree. Whether or not his attacker knew how to climb, he had no clue, but he knew that he had a better chance of escaping if he were in a tree than on the ground. Luckily for him, months of training had paid off, and he was able to climb to a high branch fast enough to avoid the snapping jaws.

     Only when he was perched on the limb did he look down. The large animal was clawing at the trunk, but it was too heavy to be heaved up, even with its massive claws. It tried to reach him in vain as Storm sat still, watching its every move silently. Eventually it turned and loped off into the forest, obviously giving up.



Chapter 9
     A shudder rippled through Storm's body. What was that thing, and what did it want with him? The image of those sharp, yellow claws was still printed firmly into his brain. He closed his eyes and shook his head, trying to get rid of the memory, but it was only replaced by a set of deadly teeth ready to snap his neck.

     The tom then looked at the sky and noticed that it was going to get dark soon. He stood up and carefully picked his way through the branches of the tree. Using an expert paw to test the strength of each considered nest, he finally found one that was just right. The branch was strong enough to hold him, but not so hard that it would be uncomfortable. Surrounding it were several small branches full of bushy leaves. Storm pulled down one of them, then stepped on it and used his teeth to break it off.

     After laying the branch down he circled his nest carefully. It was thrown together quickly, so he had to be sure it wouldn't collapse under his weight. Once he was satisfied that it would hold him he curled up into a tight ball and closed his eyes, but he couldn't sleep.

     His blue eyes opened just in time to see the sunset. The sun wasn't visible, but its warm rays still stretched over the horizon, bathing the scene in an orange light. A few thick, lumpy clouds drifted lazily at the horizon. They glowed bright orange near the bottom, then faded into light peach at the top before blending into the pink sky.

     Storm took a deep breath, then let it out slowly. Back home all the trees were so tall they never got to see the sunset very well, but here the foliage was shorter and more sparse. A shame that he couldn't stay here because of the monster. I should go farther from my Tribe before trying to settle down, he decided. After all, I've only been traveling for a day.

     Or maybe he had been traveling for more than one day. He didn't know how long he had been unconscious between when he was knocked out and when he was moved to the monster's den. But that time didn't really count, because he hadn't been making any progress.

     As he thought he continued to watch the sunset. Once it was over he closed his eyes and fell into a restless sleep. One moment he was watching the sunset, the next he found himself face to face with those small, beady eyes. He would then wake up, realize that it was only a dream, then slowly go back to sleep.  He wasn't sure which was worse: being awake in the darkness knowing that a monster was out there or dreaming about being chased by that very same thing. The night seemed drag on forever. He constantly looked toward where he knew the sunrise would be, but no sun came.



Chapter 10

     “Caw! Caw!”

     Storm was jerked awake to see a large black crow bending over him. He lifted his paw and batted feebly in its direction, but it didn't even flinch, just kept staring at him with those beady black eyes. After several minutes of struggling, Storm managed to heave himself into a sitting position. His whole body felt like it was made out of lead.

     “Caw!” Storm glared at the crow. This time his attempt at grabbing it was enough to make it flutter away to the safety of another higher branch. “Caw!” It said mockingly, clearly knowing how helpless he was.

     “Oh, shut up, stupid crow,” Storm said lazily, wincing as he twisted to groom his ruffled and muddy fur. It cawed indignantly, like it could understand him, then fluttered away. For some strange reason Storm felt like his only hope had just flown away. He almost shouted after it, “No, come back, I didn't mean it!” but stopped himself just in time, realizing how stupid he would sound. Was he going crazy?

     A high-pitched giggle came from behind him. Storm turned towards its source as quickly as he could with his stiffness and stared. A pair of emerald eyes with cat-like pupils stared back at him from the leaves of a branch. “What's so funny?” he demanded, feeling both irritated and alarmed. His fur puffed out defensively, and he wondered if he would be able to get his aching paws to unsheathe their claws should he be attacked. A slim, bracken-colored tabby slid out into view. Unlike the she-cats from back home, Storm saw no muscles under her pelt and she had a dainty air to her. Confidence seemed to radiate from her, though Storm couldn't see why; even in this state he could probably win a fight against her. Her nose wrinkled in disgust, undoubtedly her reaction to his matted fur, which still had clumps of dried blood clinging to it.

     “Oh, it's nothing,” she said, giggling again. Something about her squeaky laugh made Storm want to lash out at her, but he restrained himself. “I just heard you talking to that crow like it could actually understand you, and I wanted to know if you were... You know, special.” Her green eyes glittered with fake concern. Storm felt rage bubbling up inside him. “Or just plain stupid,” she spoke in a tauntingly sweet voice filled with sarcasm, like he was too dumb to know she wasn't concerned, but making fun of him.

     Unfortunately, he was too weak to risk attacking her. Instead he glared at her icily, then turned and jumped down from branch to branch with grace that surprised even himself. He landed softly on the forest floor, the morning dew freezing his pads, then began to walk away.


Chapter 11

     “Hey, wait!” she called after him. Storm closed his eyes and took a deep breath, willing himself to be patient, before turning around. What he saw made him grin before quickly stopping himself. She was perched unsteadily atop one branch, hesitantly lowering one paw down to the next.

     “Shouldn't have climbed it if you couldn't get back down,” he chided, quite happy to see her struggling. He sat down, this time not even bothering to hide his grin as he licked his fur clean, watching her between strokes. She progressed slowly, whining for him to help her every now and then; a couple of times she tried to guilt him into helping her, accusing him of being “unkind,” “rude,” and “barbaric.” When Storm had finally gotten all of the tangles out of his coat she was almost at the bottom.

     “How could you do that to me?” she demanded when she reached him, her grassy eyes wide with disbelief. Storm noted that they were also teary, as though climbing down unassisted had been something truly difficult and traumatizing.

     “I don't know,” he said, shrugging with fake indifference. “I guess I'm just... special.” At his words her eyes grew even wider. She seemed lost for words, obviously not used to eating her own words. Without waiting for her to get her voice back, Storm turned and began to walk away again, thinking that the crow had been better company than this sad excuse for a cat.

     “Oh, come on,” she said, trotting after him. “You know I didn't mean it.” Storm snorted disbelievingly, knowing that she had meant every word of it. “Come on,” she repeated, “We can go back to where I live. My dad'll probably have some food by now.” Storm's ears perked up at the mention of food. He couldn't deny that he was hungry, and maybe her father would be better than her. She seemed to notice his reaction, because she added an extra bounce to her step and said, “It's this way,” then lead the way.

     She lead the way surprisingly quickly. Either that or it just seemed like it because of his aching side. Determined not to show weakness, he kept up with her and kept his face straight. Walking there didn't take long.

     “Here we are,” she said, pushing aside a branch and stepping through. Storm followed, then stopped to stare. He now stood at the edge of a stream surrounded by ferns. The water was crystal clear, much clearer than anything he'd found back home. No, that's not my home now, he reminded himself. The she-cat now stood beside a particularly large clump of ferns at the base of a rock. Curious, Storm walked over to where she was and saw that it concealed the entrance to a small cave. What a wonderful place to live, he thought, Too bad she's already here. He couldn't even imagine what it would be like to live near her.  As soon as he had healed, he was leaving.



Chapter 12

     Storm pushed the ferns aside and squeezed through the narrow entrance. When he had made it through he was surprised to see that it was much bigger than he had thought. It looked big enough for a mother, father, and large litter of kits to sleep in. It had obviously been dug out for more room. In one corner was a large pile of grass, moss, and feathers, which was shaped into three nests, though there seemed to be plenty of extra. The wonderful scent of caught-prey filled the cave, and Storm saw that it came from a small indent in the stone wall on the right. Next to it was another shelf filled with a few herbs that Storm recognized from the one time he'd been in Shadeteller's den. Light filtered through a small opening in the roof.

     “Zera?” a tom's voice called from the back of the cave. Storm's fur bristled. He wouldn't put it past her to lead him into a trap; he guessed she would've found it very amusing to get revenge. “Who's with you?” A silver tom with green eyes stepped into the light.

     “Oh, just a crazy tom I met in a tree talking to a crow,” the she-cat, who Storm guessed was named Zera, answered. She shrugged, then turned to him. “So, what is your name? I'm Zera, in case you hadn't already guessed,” she gave him a meaningful look, like she understood that he was too clueless to have figured it out on his own, “and this is my brother, Tak.” Tak nodded as his name was mentioned.

     Storm hesitated, wondering if it was safe to say his name. If they knew of the Tribe of Whispering Winds, he could be in big trouble. But then he remembered that he hhad changed his name, and smiled as he said, “I'm Storm. Nice to meet you.” Storm saw Tak's eyes narrow at the sound of his name, and made a note to keep a careful eye on him. At least Zera, though annoying, seemed safe.

     “Well, I told you you could have food. It's over there,” she nodded to the caught-prey sitting in plain view in the rocky wall. Storm didn't have to be asked twice; he padded over, glancing at Tak as he passed, and took a mouse. In two gulps it was gone. Storm licked his lips and turned back to the two siblings. Just then the light from the entrance was blocked as the large figure of a dark brown tabby with emerald eyes entered.

     “Hello!” he called merrily, a grin plastered onto his face. Then, noticing Storm, he added, “Who's this? A friend of yours?” The friendly smile remained on his face; Storm liked him at once.

     “This is Storm,” Zera answered. Tak continued to look at him suspiciously.

     “Nice to meet you, Storm!” the tom said, more loudly than necessary but cheerfully. “My name's Certz. And these,” he nodded at Zera and Tak, “are my son and daughter. But you've already met them, right?” Storm nodded. Certz crossed the den and took a piece of caught-prey, then sat down in the largest nest to eat. “So, what brings you here?”

     “I... er...” Storm hesitated again, not sure how much to say. That he had shamed his Tribe by failing to climb The Great Tree, and had promptly disgraced himself and his family by fleeing rather than accepting his fate? “I left home for an adventure. None of my family wanted to come along; they tried to stop me, so I snuck out.” He then told his story, starting from the hawk chasing him, lifting him off the ground, and waking up in the nest. Then how he jumped out of the nest without looking and fell off a cliff, then found himself waking up face to face with the monster. He chose to leave out how he had dreamed about Soul.

     “So now you've got nowhere to go?” Certz asked, looking at him with interest. Storm had the feeling he knew that he wasn't being told everything. When Storm nodded, he added, “Well, you're welcome to stay here for as long as you like.”

     “Thank you,” Storm said gratefully.



Part 3 - The Rain Falls

Prologue - Spirit

     “I've been waiting for you,” Soul's voice came from behind him. Spirit spun around to face her and sat down. He was having dreams like this more often, and was finally getting used to hearing. Voices didn't make his head ring as they once had, and he could make sense of voices when he heard them now. Also, he was getting better while he was awake too. He could read lips now, and could tell from the way other cats were acting that his speech was clearer than before.

     Hello, Soul,” he said, his whiskers twitching with anticipation. “What are we going to learn today? Or should I say, tonight?”

     “Nothing,” she replied, her voice sounding different than usual. “I've watched you during the day, and you get along fine. There's no more need for our speech drills.”

     Spirit's normally deaf ears twitched in surprise. “Then why did you call me?”

     “Because I can reach you easier than the rest of the cats of your tribe. You're something special; I can sense that, and I need your help,” her piercing purple eyes stared straight at him, sending a shiver down Spirit's spine. They were cold and hard, unlike their usual calm kindness. “Will you help me?” She raised one eyebrow, and Spirit knew that after all she had done for him, he couldn't say no.

     “I'll do anything I can,” he said, swallowing nervously. What exactly did she have in mind?

     “Tomorrow afternoon you will be made a To-Be,” Soul began.

     “I will? Really?” Spirit said eagerly, cutting her off. “How do you know?”

     The only reply he received at first was a sharp stare, which silenced him. “I can see some things. You and I are both special,” she then continued. “I want you to leave the Tribe of Whispering Winds before then. Go south and slightly to the west. Get as far away as you can by nightfall. I'll give you more instructions then.”

     “What? But what about-”

     “There are more important things than your ceremony,” Soul said gently. “Don't worry. You will return, and when you do, you will have done a great service to your Tribe.”

     “A great service?” Spirit echoed.

     “Yes. It involves your brother,” a murderous look suddenly crossed her beautiful features. “You will leave tonight.”



Chapter 13

     Squish, squash, squish, squash. Dainty paws plunged through the muck. Long vinelike branches hung down, barely brushing the muddy ground. Sunlight filtered eerily through their branches, illuminating slivers of the thick mist that loomed on the forest floor. Squash, squirp! Was it getting deeper? No, she must be imagining it. Squish, squish! Moving was getting harder. Maybe she should stop and take a break... No! She had to find Cloud. He could be out here somewhere.

     The fog grew thicker. Lily fidgeted uneasily; maybe this wasn't such a good idea. Despite her anxiousness, she moved forward.

     Croak! The tabby she-cat cried out in alarm, stumbling as she turned to face whatever it was. Only a toad. She sighed with relief and started to stand up. Something wasn't right. She couldn't move. Panic began to sweep over her. What if she never got out of here?

     “Help!” she shrieked, lashing out at the sludge. She writhed desperately, but if anything only sank in deeper. “Somebody, anybody! Please! Help!” she cried out again, not knowing or caring who would hear her, as long as it would get her out.

     From somewhere overhead, an answering shriek rung out. Before she could even look up, she felt razor sharp claws digging into her back. They sunk through her coat and penetrated her skin, drawing blood. Weight pressed down on her, then began to lift. A throaty cry that sounded nothing like her own came from her mouth as she felt herself being wrenched from her muddy prison. She twisted and struggled, desperate to get free, but the sharp talons only dug into her pelt deeper. Another shriek came from the huge bird. It was going to eat her, she was sure!

     “Put me down! Let go of me!” she called up, but the bird only pulled harder. Black spots began to form around the edges of her vision, then gradually became larger until she could see nothing. She felt her strength drain away from her, and was vaguely aware of her paws leaving the ground before she spiraled into nothingness. Sorry... I tried...

Chipper and Berry

Before reading on, you should probably know a bit about what to expect.  This sub-story begins just after Part 1 of Whispering Winds, where I randomly decided to write a very spontaneous story about two misfits-- a bear and a chipmunk --who, oddly enough, speak the same language as Storm.  As with my other stories, this one has its own mini allegiances to intruduce the main characters.

Chipper is a young brown chipmunk.  Like most chipmunks, he has black and white stripes going down his body.  He's very good at climbing and leaping from branch to branch.  In nearly every way he's just an average chipmunk:  Smart, quick, persistent, loves to talk, and annoying.  But Chipper has one thing that sets him apart from his friends and family, making him an outcast.  His best friend is a bear.

Berry is an adolescent bear.  Most of his body is dark brown, except for his muzzle, tail, ears, and the tip of his paws, which are black.  His underbelly is also a slightly lighter brown than the rest of him.  He's fun loving and is easily bored with the same everyday routine, and often gets into mischief.  However, he hates surprises and can become aggressive easily.  His best friend is a chipmunk named Chipper, which the other bears find odd and thus try to avoid him.

 

Prologue

     "I know it doesn't sound like I play an important role, but the truth is that I do!" the small chipmunk squeaked.

     "Uh-Huh."  A deep voice rumbled an uncertain response "And I'm a porcupine."  The large, grizzled creature grumbled.  His front claw dug into
the ground in boredom.  Today was just another day, which would be just like the last and tomorrow would be just the same as today.  Good thing he had Chipper to amuse him.

     "Exactly!" the small furry creature exclaimed, tail lashing back and forth with excitement "I think you're finally catching on, Berry!"

     "You do know that I could eat you when ever I feel like it, don't you?"

     "Yes, but you wouldn't." he sounded very sure of himself, like it was just an obvious fact that he wouldn't get eaten.

     "Of course not!  Do you have any idea how bad you guys taste?" he asked, cringing and sticking out his tongue to show how disgusted he was at the mere thought.

     "No, and I don't plan on finding out."  His whiskers twitched as though he were offended "Unlike you, I don't kill.  Much less eat my own kind.  You know, many of my family members frown upon that kind of behavior."

     The bear shrugged.  "Anything can happen.  You never know, maybe you'll find you like it."

     Chipper snorted, "Maybe a cat will fall from the sky!"

     "Everyone knows cats aren't real.  They're just old fairy tales.  A cub's story used to scare the wits out of them and get them to go to bed." he chuckled quietly "If you stay up too late, the cat will come to get you!  They lurk through the shadows at night.  They may be small, but don't be fooled by their size.  They're vicious creatures."

     After a pause both of them burst out laughing so hard they cried.  The bear let out a roar as something hit his exposed belly, hard.  "That's not funny!" he snapped at Chipper, teeth bared aggressively.  His anger changed to confusion when he saw the small critter huddling in a corner, a look of sheer terror on his face.  His lips moved and he pointed, but he only made small gagging noises.

     Berry whipped around, fur bristling.  "It's a...  a...  a cat?!?" he cried, not believing his eyes.

Chapter 1

     Chipper and Berry looked at each other, then at the cat.  It lifted its head and stood up.
     "Aaaaah!" they screamed in unison.  It hissed at them.
     "Back!" Berry snarled, lashing out in fear with a paw.  It dodged and snarled even more viciously.
     "It's coming to get us!" Chipper screamed, covering his eyes.  When he said that it seemed to calm down.
     "Wha- What?" it said in a strange accent.  "You talk?"
     "Of course we talk," Chipper sneered. "You're the one who's not supposed to talk."

     It stared at the chipmunk, looking baffled.  "Didn't anyone ever tell you that it's not polite to stare?" he demanded, frowning.
     "I'm sorry," he said.  An awkward silence followed, until it asked.  "Do you...  Live here?"
     Berry nodded.  "Are you...  a cat?"  The strange creature gave him an odd look and nodded slowly.  "And you're not going to eat me, right?"

     When he said that, the cat burst out laughing.  "Do I look like I could eat you?" he asked, still giggling.  "I was more worried about you eating me."
     "I'm a vegetarian," Berry admitted, waiting for it to laugh again, just like everyone else did.
     "That's fine with me!" it said approvingly. "I'm Storm.  What's your name?"
     "Berry."

     Chipper cleared his throat loudly.  "Hey, what about me?  I'm still here!" he grinned. "I'm Chipper.  Nice to meet'cha."