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Fun stuff Redd. It reminds me of when I was a kid, how much I loved to bring my figures out into the yard to play in a more realistic environment.-CHEWIE

Nice to see you post a story finally, Redd!! Those pics look great. Where's Com. Gree?? I like the use of the hologram base!-S_A_Longhorn

Nice to finaly see a story from you!-bear78 

Pretty cool Redd!-CrazyAboutClones

Nice Redd, cool to see a part of the film we never saw!!! The demise of Luminara!! Oh and great setting!! But um you might want to move the vans box in the pic!!! -Lady_Jaye

Visually this was your best one yet, and the environment was much more realistic looking. You're getting much better at this.

I thought a bit of the conversations between the clones was odd (and a couple minor typos), but at the same time it was good to see some personality in them. I was surprised to see them questioning Palpatine. But I wonder how much they really would know that their DNA is altered to be loyal to him... I think it would maybe be something they're not even aware of... they seem to be loyal to the Republic and the Jedi, but when Order 66 is given, it seems to trigger something within them that they don't even know about, and is almost an involuntary reaction. But I could be wrong.

And I see you got your Oppo figure.-CHEWIE

very cool, great job. good use of unusual characters. looking forward to the next chapter. -strikeg

Good chapter Redd! Much better lighting and photography than the previous. Good plot too. I think how the 3 clones interact is funny at times. They are good as individuals. Good job. -Blight

Great chapter Redd.
I really like how you have Bly hot for Aayla.-Flacksguy

-UPADTE 11/13/05-

New Republic issue! Just scoll down a little while. :p

-UPDATE 11/5/05/

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10 Years Before The Battle Of Geonosis...


Taun We: How are the first clones for the army coming along?
Droid: Hello. They are healthy and strong.


Droid: But there is a problem.
Taun We: Problem?
Droid: Yes. They are not normal. They take orders and have the mental knowlage and capabilities. But they have minds of their own. They have normal human thoughts and abilities. They have their own personalities and features. They can feel things such as jelousy, hatred, even love. This error can be fixed for the rest of the army of course. But these three...


Taun We: Then they will be perfect leaders for the army. We will have to give them unique armor and weapons. They will be even better than the ARCs and Commandos.
Just wait and see...

Ten Years Later.... One Month After The Battle Of Geonosis....

The battle of Kamino rages. The clones struggle to protect the cloning facilities.


The commander's squad is deminished. He stands alone...


Commander Redd: Run!
Commander: Huh?
Commander Redd: RUN!


Commander Vash: Fire in the hual!


BOOM!!!


Commander: Uhhhhhhh... Who are you?


Commander Redd: We are Jango's Commandos and we are helping out a fellow brother.


Commander: I'm Commander Kip. My squad has been decimated by the droids. They've taken the most of the facility.


Commander Vash: Commander! Look!


Tuan We: I surrender!


Commander Redd: Offensive Strike Position Alpha!


Commander Redd: Die Droid!


Droid: Not so strong NOW! You have a 96% chance of NOT surviving this ENCOUNTER!


Commander Redd: You might want to check your math!


Commander Redd: Yah!!
Droid: Pooodooo....


Commander Bly: The area is secure.
Taun We: Thank you for saving my life.


Taun We: I was right to put you into service!


Commander Vash: Let's go find a clear landing dock with a gunship or we'll all be blown to Coreilla!


Commander Redd: Wait...I hear something....


BOOOOM!


Bly: There's a Jedi inside! We have to get him out!


Commander Vash: Him?
Commander Bly: Ahhhhh....


Aayla Secura: Huh?


Commander Bly: I'll help you out.
Aayla Secura: I'm not that hurt!


Aayla Secura: Thanks for the help guys!
Commander Bly: No problem.


Commander Kip: Commander!
Commander Redd: Kip!
Commander Kip: I found a landing pad that's open and has a gunship that is ready to go!
Aayla Secura: Let's go!

At the landing pad...


Commander Kip: Here she is.
Commander Redd: Thanks Kip. Are you coming?
Caommander Kip: No. I'm gonna stay here and help the children escape.


Commander Redd: Suit your self. Thanks again Kip.
Commander Kip: No big deal-


-Just helping out a fellow brother.

THE END

Republic #2: The Dawn Of The War!

One Month After The Battle Of Geonosis....



The star destroyer orbits Coruscant. It picked up all the Jedi generals. Palpatine is making a speech before they are all spread off into the galaxy. To places that people question, "are they worth dying for?"


*Clapping*
Palpatine: Thank you! Thank you! I am sure we can beat the Separatist threat! Now lead the armies into battle for a better future!
*More Clapping*


Palpatine: I am honored to have the Jedi as an ally to the Republic.


Palpatine: I am also honored to have the Jedi fight and die for me.


Now lets press forward into battle!
*Clapping*


Redd: He's pampering the Jedi, but he fails to mention us.

Vash: How dare you talk negatively about the Chancellor!

Redd: He ain't so great.


Vash: What? How could you not like him?! It's coded in our DNA!

Redd: On training missions, before the war, I saw the injustice like slvery, bribery, and the Kessel Mines.

Vash: He can't be everywhere at once!


Vash: Bly agrees with me! Right Bly?

Bly: I'll do it later...


Bly: Um, I'm gonna go over there and, uh, meet uh, someone.
Redd: Okay then.


Vash: There goes Lover Boy.


Redd: Looks who's talking! I saw how you were looking at master Kelix!


Vash: Heh.. Ummmm....
Redd: Heh.. Ummmm.... what ?


Vash: A misunderstanding I assure you! Heh...

Redd: Right....


Redd: Palps is ending his speech.

Vash: I asked you to not call him that...


*Clapping* Palpatine: Thank you! Thank you!


The Jedi leave the area. Aayla turns to get her assigned mission.

Aayla: I'm sorry, I did'nt see you there.

Bly: No problem.


Aayla: You were one of the clones that rescued me on Kamino! Hi! I'm just going to get my assigned mission. Oh! I'm sorry I never caught your name!

Bly: Ummm.... Uh...

Voice: Aayla!


Aayla: Sorry! Gotta go! Bye!

Bly: Stupid, Stupid, Stupid!


Redd: Who's stupid?

Bly: Uh, no one.

Redd: We need to get our assignments.

Vash: Let's go. Tuan We is expecting us.


The clones get their assigned missions.

Tuan We: I have your missions. You will be assigned to command a sector army. This means you will be with a Jedi High General and a lesser one.


Taun We: You will be assigned to master Oppo Rancisis.


Taun We: You will be assigned to Master Seasee Tiin.



Tuan We: And lastly, Bly, you will be assigned to master Plo Koon.


Taun We: Those are your missions. Are we clear?


All Three: As clear as the crystals on Mygeeto!

Taun We: Good!


The Three say goodbye in the hanger bay.


Redd: Goodbye brothers.
Vash: Let us meet again in good health!
Bly: Yes.



The three separate for the first time since their training missions.

Redd: Taun We said that my general would be waiting for me here.


Redd: Is that him?


Oppo Rancisis: Get more Gunships. This is a big mission.


Clone: Right Away Sir!
Oppo Rancisis: Thank you.


Oppo Rancisis: Ah! You must be Commander Redd! I feel honored to work with a clone of such ranking! Hm? What's the matter? Never see a Thisspiasian before?

Redd: No, and thank you master. I just, have a lot on my mind.

Oppo Rancisis: Well clear your mind! Keep it focused on the upcoming battle!

Oppo Rancisis: Now come, we have work to do!

THE END

Star Wars: Republic #3: A New Threat (Part One Of The Battle Of Ryloth) 





Jedi Master Oppo Rancisis and Jango Commando Redd wait on the Star Destroyer Bridge for the mighty ship to arrive at their destination.


Speaker: Now arriving in the Ryloth system!


Redd: Master, we've arrived in Ryloth space, should we head for the hanger for briefing?


Oppo: Yes my friend, I suppose we shall.


Oppo: But before we do, I want you to meet some of the jedi you'll be working with.


Oppo: Ah! Here they come now!


W'Warrick: Oppo!


W'Warrick: It's good to see you again my old friend!


Oppo: It's good to see you again as well.


Oppo: Redd, these are my good friends, Master W'Warrick, and recently knighted Kay Kelix.
Redd: It's nice to meet you both.


Kay: It's nice to see you again Oppo, and it's nice to meet you Redd.


Oppo: I suppose we better get down to the hanger bay.


In the hanger bay, the Jedi tell the clones what is going to happen in th upcoming battle.


Oppo: Intelligence tells us that a new threat is hiding in the Ryloth system. Intelligence also says that this new threat wields lightsabers.


Kay: Intelligence also says that he is hiding in the desert half of the planet. I was born there, therefore having a good knowledge of the area; I should be able to find him.


Redd: The Jedi and I will sneak into the sep's compound and try to destroy the new threat. The sep council will also be there, so if we can destroy them, the war may end soon. Clones, it's your job to stay alert in case we need you to come in and save our skins.


Oppo: With the Separatists council being there, it makes this mission very important. We mustn’t fail!


Oppo: Is everyone clear?
Clones: Yes sir!
Oppo: Good. Now prepare for planet fall.


Deep in the separatist's compound on the planet Ryloth...


General Grievous: Distinguished members of the separatist council, I am General Grievous. I have been appointed to be your babysitters for Count Dooku. I have also been appointed to be supreme commander of the droid armies.


Grievous: Also, Viceroy, I am now in direct control of your droid armies.
Nute Gunray: What! This is an outrage!


Grievous: Send your complaints to the Count!


Gunray: I should have never helped fund your resurrection you pathetic cyborg!



Grievous: Bah! You're lucky Dooku wants you alive! I should throw you to the Jeedi when they get here you cowardly Neimodian scum!
Separatists: What? Jedi?


Grievous: Don't worry. I'll explain everything in good time.

TO BE CONTINUED

Redd's squad lands on the desert side of the planet Ryloth. They set up base camp, and are scouting for the SEP's base.


Redd: Hey, Master Rancisis, do you want something to drink? I made some Jawa juice for the troops. It's past 100 degrees out here and you're wearing a robe..


Oppo: No, but thank you, my friend.


Kay: See. Up on that ridge.
Clone: Oh, yes M'lady.


Kay: Master Rancisis! Commander! Over here!


Kay: We have spotted the SEP's base. It's in the side of the mountain. It's an easy climb, and it's unguarded.

Oppo: What seems, is not always is. I'll take the transmitter in case we need to contact the clones to save our skins.

Redd: I'll rally up the team of Jedi.


The group of heroes climb the rocky mountain.


Inside the base...

Kay: *sigh* Made it!


Oppo: Look there! A elevator.


The team take the elevator up into the unknown.


Deep in SEP compound...


Droid: Uh, General.
Grievous: Yessss?


Droid: A team of Jedi and a clone have made their way into the complex. They are on elevator # 32 B.


Grievous: Ah! Just as Sidious predicted! Crush them! Shut the elevator off!
Droid: Yes sir!


Meanwhile...
Sheeeunk Klunk!
*Fwooooosh!*


Redd: The elevator is dropping at rapid speed!
Oppo: Jedi! Use your force powers to slow the elevator!


Oppo: Okay, keep holding on to the elevator, we stopped. Now, what?
Redd: You're the master! But luckily I have a plan.
*Bang!*


Fwooofwooofwoo. Klank!


Redd: The rope is pretty taut. It can hold me and my armor as well. So let's get outta here. They obviously know we're here. Otherwise, they need to fix their mech droids!


The group climbs the rope into, relative safety.
Oppo (thinking): He's pretty rude for a clone.


W'Warrick: Just a little further my friends.


Redd: By looks of it, there's a door down the hall.
Oppo: Hold on a second.


Oppo: I sense a dark presence near. It could be down there. Bursting into that hallway could be suicidal.


Redd: Listen, us clones do what we must to complete the mission no matter what. I may not be a normal clone, I even doubt the chancellor, but at least I still have some clone characteristics. Now lets go.
Oppo: Fine with me, come Jedi.


The group emerges from the hallway, and to their surpise...


Grievous: Go! Go! They will be here any second!


Grievous: Heheh, Jeedi, I was-


-expecting you. Heheh.


W'Warrick: We can take'em! Right Oppo?

Oppo: No. Lower your weapon.


Grievous: I am glad we are of understanding.


Grievous: Kill them.


Redd: You gotta plan old man?
Oppo: Don't fret. I'm sure the force will not let us die.


Grievous: Remember to take their lightsabers to!


Grievous: Wha?


Grievous: Jeedi!!!


Grievous: Fine! I will deal with this Republic slime my self! Droids, kill them all!


Redd: How did they know?!
Oppo: While you darted down the hallway into your doom, I sent a signal to base camp to come and save us.


Redd: Grievous is escaping!


Redd: I'm going after him!


Oppo: Wait! I'm going with you! Ugh! He's so arrogant.



To Be Continued...

REPUBLIC #5: The Heat of the Battle!



The battle has left the compound, and is now scorching the deserts of Ryloth.


Like the sandstorms of Ryloth, the battle rages in a blur of sand, fire, and blasts of red and blue.


The two sides both want to be the winner, but in the end there can only be one.


IG-8090: The republic forces are getting closer! Abandon position?


IG-6606: No! Hold position! We must obey master Grievous!


Grievous emerges from the cavern...

Grievous: Remind me to give you a hot oil bath once the battle is over, my obedient drone.


Grievous: Be prepared! A Jeedi and a clone are coming!


IG-6606: Get ready...


IG-7890: What the?


WHACK!
IGs: Ahhhhh!


Blast! Blast!
IG-6606: Ahhh!


Redd: In the name of the Republic you are under arrest!


Grievous: You talk tough, clone! Heheh!


Redd: Oppo! Take out Grievous! I'll take out these IG stooges.


*Crackle!*
Oppo: With pleasure, Redd.


*Shhhhhk!*
Oppo: I did'nt think that droids could weild lightsabers...
Grievous: You are ignorant to tease a Kaleesh war lord!


*Fwoom!*
Grievous: For that, you shall die!


*Fwookessshk!*
Oppo: I do sense a small force connection in you...


Oppo: Arrrgh!


Grievous: Bad move Jeedi! Heheheh!


Grievous: Gah! My saber!


Oppo: Get's them every time!


Grievous: You may have my saber! But you are still no match for my saber skills!


Commander Redd shoots Grievous's saber out of his hand.
Redd: Yeah, right!


Oppo: You must surrender!


Fwooosh!
Grievous: Heheheh!


Grievous: I'm sorry, I have to go now. Hehehe.


Redd: I can still shoot him down!
Oppo: My friend! Stop! Your shots are in vain! He's gone. There will be another day. We still have a battle to win.
Redd: Right.


Redd: Task one, protect the supply Bantha.


Redd: Master Warrick! A super bomber droid!


Blast! Blast!
Redd: Just saved your hide from being blown all the way back to Coruscant!


Redd: Task two: liberate the crashed the gunship crew!


Commander: Destroyers! ! On the northern ridge!


Redd: Those charges should do the trick!


BAM!
Redd: Bulls eye!


As the battle progresses, the SEPs gain the upper hand.
Commander: Redd! WE are pinned down! We are doomed!


BLOOOOOOOOOM!


Redd: What the Sith was that!

Oppo: It must have been a planetary gun. A Star Destroyer planetary gun.

Redd: Well, whatever it was, it save our skins!


Kit Fisto: I am glad you are okay. I tracked Oppo's distress signal to here. Seems I arrived just in time.

Oppo: What are you doing out here?


Kit: I'm being sent to Mon Calamari to diminish the threat of the separatists there. I was in te area and stopped by. I'm gonna be on my way in a bit. But I will leave you some troops. I can see you need.

Redd: Oh! And I see you're with one of those "ARC" troopers, huh? Well you can't beat the best commander, me!

Oppo: Redd...



To Be Continued...

 
Republic # 6: The First Victory


The republic forces have traveled across the deserts of Ryloth to the desert capital. General Grievous and his army have taken over, and we are hiding out waiting to strike.


Grievous has tons of droids in the senate building he's hiding in.


Redd: Settle down! Grievous has gone down to lower levels, now is our time to strike!


Oppo: Okay, here's the plan. Some of the troops that came here and lost the capital earlier, set up trenches. We need to go through the trenches to the other side of the city.


Oppo: There is a machine gun turret implanted at the top of the complex. It could tear your to pieces if you're not careful! Is everyone clear?

Clones: Yeah!

Oppo: Let's do it for the Republic, for Ryloth, and for FREEDOM!


Clones: Yeah!

Oppo: Good! Now Go! Go!


We all rushed out into almost certain death.


The machine gun shot out blasts like rain of fire at 100 miles per-hour. I was certain I would be shot.


We all rushed and ran for cover. Some things I do fast, this was not one of them!


Clone: Gah!

Kay: Gasp! I'll help you!


Doosh! Doosh! Doosh!

Kay: Ahhhhh!


W'Warrick: No! Kay!


W'Warrick rushes across the war zone.

W'Warrick: *Gasping for breath* Kay!-are you-is she?


Clone: She's in no critical condition sir. But she won't be able to walk until she has bacta treatment. I also suggest that she should be removed from the battle field.

Kay: I'll be fine master.

W'Warrick: I'm not going to let any padawan of mine die crippled in a trench! Since you can't walk-


-I'll carry you!

Kay: Master!


Doosh! Doosh! Doosh!

Clone: Ahhhhh!

Redd: Ah! Close one!

Oppo: Redd!


Oppo: Up here!


Oppo uses the force to smack the droids with the bridge.

Droids: Ahhh!


Oppo: Come! Let's go!


Inside...

Grievous: Hurry up! The Jeedi slime will be here any moment!


The room erupts with blasts and bursts.

Grievous: Arrrrgh!


Redd: You won't escape this time Grievous!

Grievous: Oh on the contraire!


Grievous: Hahaahaha!


Grievous: Haha! Stupid Jeedi!

Grievous jumps off the building into-



-The awaiting lap of the Republic!

Clone: Stupid droid.

Grievous: Arrrrrgh!


In the after math of the battle, Oppo approaches Redd.


Redd: Hey. How's Kay?

Oppo: Fine.

Redd: And Grievous?

Oppo: He's going to shipped to Coruscant for interrogation and trial.


Oppo: Redd, I've really enjoyed working with you. It's been an experience I will not soon forget.

Redd: Same here. I hope I'll get to work with you soon.

Oppo: Yes.

Redd: Good bye.

Oppo: I wouldn't say good bye just yet. After all-


Oppo: The war has just begun.

THE END 

 

Execute Order 66 Trilogy: Story #1- The Death Of Luminara Unduli

The Planet Of Kasshyk. The command center for the battle of Kasshyk.

Luminara: I'm going scouting for any Sep activity.
Commander Folo: Yes my lady!

Bzzzzt!

Palpatine: Commander Folo, execute order 66.

Commander Folo: It will be done my lord

Meanwhile, Luminara and her scouting party search the jungle

Comlink: Beep!
AT-RT Driver #1: Huh?

Comlink: Execute order 66.
AT-RT Driver #1: Yes commander!

AT-RT Drivers 1-3: Blast'em!
Wookie: Raaaarara!

Luminara: Wha?

Luminara: Treason is it? I will do what I must to defend myself.

AT-RT Drivers 1-3: Blast her!
Blast! Blast!

Bedeeew! Block!

AT-RT Driver #2: Aaaah!
Blast! Blast!

Luminara: Ahhhhah!

BLAST! BLAST! BLAST!

AT-RT Driver #1: Inform the commander that execute order 66 was a sucess.

AT-RT Driver #3: Yes Sir

EXECUTE ORDER 66 STORY #2: The Demise Of Shaak Ti!

The Jedi temple is under attack by Darth Vader and the 501st Leigon!

The clones spare no one and nothing.

Meanwhile, a group of Jedi try to protect some younglings.

Blast! Blast!
Twi'Lek: Aaaaahaah!

The younglings huddle in fear, at the loss of their master.

Blast! Blast!
Rodian: Maaaaaaha!

Anakin: Cease fire!

Shaak Ti: Wah?

Anakin: Your end is near Shaak Ti!

Shaak Ti: How could you betray your brothers and sisters?
Anakin: That is none of your concern!

Shaak Ti: I always sensed much anger in you.
Anakin: Shut Up!

Anakin: SHUT UP!!!

Shaak Ti: Is that how a Jedi speaks?
Anakin: SHUT UP! ARARAGARAG!


Shaak Ti: My lightsaber!
Anakin: IT'S OVER!


Anakin: You die now!


Shaak Ti: There is no death; only the force. Maybe you should have thought about that before you did this.


Shhhhhhk!




Anakin: Your turn now!


Anakin: Bwahahaha
Younglings: Helllllp!


*Slash!* *Drop* *Drop*

THE END

The Murder Of Kay'Kelix



Anakin continues his onslaught on the temple.


From the meditation garden, Jedi Master Kay'Kelix meditates.


I wonder what else this war can do to damage the galaxy?



Thousands injured, millions dead. Makes me think, are we on the right side?




I feel a disturbance in the force...


It's near...


Oh! Master Skywalker. *Pant* I thought-


You thought right.
Sky-walker?


Why?


My-my lightsaber!


*BOOOM!* A explosion shakes the temple.
I-I-I am n-not afraid to d-die.


Gooood!
*Gulp*


Aaaaah!
Hahahahahahahahah!


Good riddens, rebel scum.


Her saber will be a good addition to my master's collection.


What's the situation Trooper?
We found a Jedi in a coma laying in the flower bed. We eliminated the rebel.
Goood, Gooood!
What now?
Set the gardens on fire!
Yes Sir!

.

THE END