WHEN LIGHTNING FLASHED
By Jeanne Allen
Publisher: Double Dragon Publishing, Inc.
http://www.double-dragon-ebooks.com/
Genre: Romance
ISBN-10: 1-55404-615-7
ISBN-13: 978-1-55404-615-7
Pages: eBook: 115
Price: eBook: $5.99
Romance across times and across universes.
“When Lightning Flashed” held promise for me, yes the lost/found/who’s who love wasn’t a strong point for me. I couldn’t get into the romance.
However, the Prologue captured me. The idea of a dying knight being lead by a ghost, perhaps to the other side hooked me immediately. I was shocked when the first chapter brought me to our modern day and a near rape; however, having the hero arrive through a flash of lightning was dramatic.
After this I drifted away from the story. Deanne, the near rape victim, accepted this strange hero and his killing too quickly. The story felt rushed and unclear.
Once again, I need to ask – is it just me not mixing with the story?