The ChrisChat Reviews

The Start of Magic: Part I of The First Story of The Ehvelen

By Dr. Bob Rich

 

For more information, Dr. Bob Rich’s site:  http://bobswriting.com/

 

Genre:  Fantasy
ISBN:  eBook: 1-877053-06-6

Pages: eBook: 196
Price:  eBook: $10.00 (Australian)

 

   

 

Prepare: Some sexual scenes within context of storytelling.

 

 

Have you ever wondered about mankind’s first meeting with Elves?  Dr. Rich’s series “The First Story of the Ehvelen” reveals his version of this historical meeting.  But, is it his version or the true tales of the Ehvelen People just found?

 

This is not a fast read.  Dr. Rich offers a compact telling of a nomadic tribe that is used to killing and stealing females to give them sons, and through the sons, power.  These people, the Doshi, are barbaric when compared to the Ehvelen.  And, to the Doshi, the Ehvelen are “Midgets” who possess magical powers.  How else could such small beings kill Doshi males?  How else can the Doshi explain the “Midget” females wearing men’s clothing and killing like men?

 

This first part is told through the eyes of Heather, a young Ehvelen girl who learns to survive as a captured slave of the Doshi.  Becoming their leader’s ‘woman,’ along with his other ‘women.’

 

Heather helps perpetuate the myths the Doshi men share about her people.  All in the hopes of ultimately defeating them at their own game.  Will Heather escape; survive the attempt; and warn her people of the war that is coming to them?

 

As I mentioned, this isn’t a fast or easy read Dr Rich developed a complete tribal history for the Doshi never painting them as completely evil beings.  The Ehvelen people’s history is sparingly shared via Heather’s internal comparisons and her conversations with the other women.

 

At times “The Start of Magic” reads with the calm quiet voice of a land’s Native People and, at other times, with the crashing and dominating destructive voice of an egotistical bully.

 

You must realize that this story is being told to us via an Ehvelen storyteller.  This isn’t just a straightforward story of groups of people discovering each other.  It is a written history of a mythical race of people that very few believe in anymore.

 

Between all there is pride of self; belief in self and ways of life; and that the other way is wrong.  An interesting view of a classic tale of one people forced against another.

 

A very different Elf, Ehvelen, story.