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Dreams are what keep you going. The dreams of her and him. They will bind themselves even across the seas and their spirits will always win.
There is a very special lady here on Allpoetry by the name Catressa. Her husband serves our country proudly and is being shipped out soon.
| maryannde on Sep 07, 2004, 9:57 p.m. |
I am only woman, nothing more 3432 critiques, 269 poems.
My my...this was not only very visual, almost tactile in its expression, but also so very sensual.
Sigh... I enjoyed this a great deal, and can only imagine that this is what will keep them together in the days they are apart.
| blkmagicwoman on Sep 07, 2004, 10:02 p.m. |
Anyone can have sex, making love takes guts... 565 critiques, 2 poems.
It's so rare to read or even hear a man's fantasies...I fantasize all the time day and night. My writing gets me in the mood and my boyfriend reaps the benefits, but he refuses to verbalize any fantasies he may have himself. He simply contributes to mine quietly and happily. I wonder if his fantasies are like that? Sometimes its so frustrating to not know...it's refreshing to know that at least SOME men can fantasize and express the fantasies without fear!
Thank you for the wonderful visualization of your passion! I love it! Happy Dreams!
|truembrace on Sep 07, 2004, 11:55 p.m. |
if only i could write you into the palm of my hand 3211 critiques, 189 poems.
I remember watching a movie not too long ago and there was a line or something in it that went something like, "when they come for you... just make sure you put yourself in another place." Such is the case with things as you've written above. I can only imagine what our men and women go through in such situations where their only saving grace are the thoughts of home and daydreams that keep them moving forward.
Quite the fantasy illustrated in this piece. Here and there I dabble in reading the erotica and once in a while cover a topic of erotica of my own. I can't quite say I've ever achieved such detail that would be able to compete with what you've done here. Definitely something here that would pull someone's mind into the topsy turvy emotions of lust.
Quite the act of penmenship here
|Nyx Iscariot on Sep 08, 2004 |
.heaven wont let him in, hell wants him. 1738 critiques, 251 poems.
i love the back n' forth in the last paragraph. it's a delight to see someone proficient in writing, and who doesn't feel the need to use vulgarity at every turn ( unlike myself )
This was gorgeous, and .. always fun to wake up from dreams like this, though, when there is someone with you to wake up to.
|adrenalindude on Sep 08, 2004 |
Dance across life 51 critiques, 0 poems. said:
A little early for such intense erotic reading, who am I trying to kid, it is never too early. Very exciting poetry. Very enjoyable. Good luck with the contest, if this is anything to go by with the contest, it should make some fun reading.
| Catressa on Sep 08, 2004, 1:53 |
Find something beautiful in the moment... 3202 critiques, 503 poems.
I have honestly only read a few erotic writes on here that affect me Chuck but this honestly did. You are now placed up on a Pedestal with Touchof1der (Kimberly) in Erotic. Fanning my flushed face, this was a very visual write, as most of your writes are, but you also have a personal perspective being a soldier once upon a time wait let me rephrase that. I don't think you ever stop being a soldier, You just relearn a few things. THANK YOU for taking the time to write this for me, I feel honored, and very Pleased. Take Care My Friend, Be Safe, As Always, the tough little Army Wife, Catressa
|Mark Glinka on Sep 08, 2004, 7:04 |
Take nothing for granted... Hold everything dear. 262 critiques, 68 poems.
Holy crap! I'm absolutely speechless! This is one of the best erotica writes I have ever read. You went into perfect detail in every aspect of it and it made me picture me and my girlfriend in the situation in the story. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!
|rabiddog on Sep 08, 2004, 8:25 |
I'll keep writing if you keep reading! 58 critiques, 5 poems.
Shew.... (pant, pant) that was pretty hot. I love reading erotica and I must admit, i am pretty tempted to give writing it a bash too. Although I must say, from a womans point of view, you did a pretty good job in keeping this tasteful. A lot of time when I read something some guy has written, he kinda looses the plot a bit. I think he gets a bit tied up in his thought process, takes care of the aches and pains, then continues trying to write and I pick it up instantly. You however kept your rythm throughout this piece and did a bloody brilliant job of it too. Congratulations.
| MagicLady on Sep 08, 2004, 3:40 p.m. |
Because Nice Matters!! 4378 critiques, 190 poems.
I love these dreams. Love reading of others dreams too. I think she will enjoy this read. If she doesn't, I sure did...I'll award you a trophy.
Nice job! Cheryl
|Frosted Dreams on Sep 08, 2004, 7:42 p.m. |
2 critiques, 2 poems.
It isn't often you see a man write his point of view on such a subject. Lots like to 'kiss and tell' to their buddies. Very sensual and erotic. I don't visit the site often enough, but I always enjoy reading your work when I do. Nice job Chuck.
|Angie on Sep 15, 2004, 8:16 |
27 critiques, 6 poems. Verdict: awesome
Wow.....steamy piece and then you can't help but also feel the emotoin of a solier missing his wife. It's nice to see such a feeling piece of the man in out society. Chuck you did and awesome job with this write I'm sure this will come in handy on a cold lonely night for Cat.....lol. On a serious note thanks for also being one of the brave ones who defend our country!!! God bless you!!!